Shalott

1yr

Commented

I love this chapter. Gustav and David's conversation totally captivated me.

ch 26 Heart to Heart Talk

Believe in Love Again

LGBT+ · AmberFullMoon

Shalott

1yr

Posted

The book is okay. It didn't grab me, but I guess it's a matter of sentence construction. Many sentences are just too long, tedious and confusing. This makes it difficult to read and slows the reader down. Instead of focusing on the fate of the characters, I find myself trying to unravel overly complex sentences. If the author corrects this, the book will be better

Owned By The Omega Emperor [BL]

LGBT+ · AuthorWissal

Shalott

1yr

Posted

I highly appreciate ML's internal conflict. A new situation can turn someone's world upside down, make him stop thinking and make his behavior chaotic. The author brilliantly shows how the new collides with the old in David's life. There are more interesting characters in the book and I can't wait to see their plots blossom. I'm looking forward to a long story.

Believe in Love Again

LGBT+ · AmberFullMoon

Shalott

1yr

Commented

It's a little strange, but true, how people can live normal and carefree lives when they don't know that their friends are going through difficult times. Jack is one of my favorite characters. I'm keeping my fingers crossed for him!

ch 235 He Is His Life, Now and Forever

Race With a Heart

LGBT+ · AmberFullMoon

Shalott

1yr

Commented

Good chapter. Thank yaou!

ch 219 Everything For Him and Me

Race With a Heart

LGBT+ · AmberFullMoon

Shalott

1yr

Commented

I really love these two! This couple has an incredibly deep understanding of each other. It's a beautiful thing.

ch 217 Regrets or No Regrets

Race With a Heart

LGBT+ · AmberFullMoon

Shalott

1yr

Replied to AmberFullMoon

It is my pleasure :)

ch 215 10 Is it PTSD?

Race With a Heart

LGBT+ · AmberFullMoon

Shalott

1yr

Commented

I think Martin came up with a very good idea :)

ch 216 The Challenge That Flows from Love

Race With a Heart

LGBT+ · AmberFullMoon

Shalott

1yr

Commented

I read the first chapter of this book 2 years ago. Author, I think you have grown with your characters over that time :)

ch 215 10 Is it PTSD?

Race With a Heart

LGBT+ · AmberFullMoon

Shalott

1yr

Commented

Very enjoyable to read this chapter. I like the direction the relationship between the two is going.

ch 26 26 Past, Present and…

Save Me Before I Fall Down

LGBT+ · AmberFullMoon

Shalott

1yr

Commented

The ending of the chapter is so strong! I feel what Adam feels. So well written!

ch 23 23 The Eyes of Someone Who Believes in Justice

Save Me Before I Fall Down

LGBT+ · AmberFullMoon

Shalott

1yr

Replied to 101KawaiiPatato

Hard to disagree with you :)

ch 21 21 A Sweet Perspective

Save Me Before I Fall Down

LGBT+ · AmberFullMoon

Shalott

1yr

Posted

This book is very recommendable. In intro it introduces a serious, somewhat dark atmosphere, but leaves room for hope that everything will be alright. Adam quickly won my sympathy and I keep my fingers crossed that he will get out of his problems quickly. I recommend both the book and the author who never let me down when it comes to constructing stories and especially creating wonderful, very realistic characters.

Save Me Before I Fall Down

LGBT+ · AmberFullMoon

Shalott

2yr

Commented

Hubert is a man who came at the right time in Adam's life :)

ch 16 “Then why do you blame yourself?”

Save Me Before I Fall Down (Prologue)

LGBT+ · AmberFullMoon

Shalott

2yr

Commented

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ch 12 In the Morning Light

Save Me Before I Fall Down (Prologue)

LGBT+ · AmberFullMoon

Shalott

2yr

Posted

This is only the first chapters, actually the intro, but I think the book is already recommendable. It introduces a serious, somewhat dark atmosphere, but leaves room for hope that everything will be alright. Adam quickly won my sympathy and I keep my fingers crossed that he will get out of his problems quickly. I recommend both the book and the author who never let me down when it comes to constructing stories and especially creating wonderful, very realistic characters.

Save Me Before I Fall Down (Prologue)

LGBT+ · AmberFullMoon

Shalott

2yr

Posted

I really like places where the action takes place. The author gives them a great atmosphere without making long and boring descriptions that I don't like. Likewise with the weather. I like that the characters are not plain. One moment it seems to me that I already know everything about them, and then I learn something new and surprising. I like it when I discover them piece by piece. I also like that we already have the bad guys. This makes the book immediately interesting. I hope it will be a long adventure with this book.

Love Begins with the Hot Summer (Prologue)

LGBT+ · AmberFullMoon

Shalott

2yr

Commented

This book is getting more and more interesting

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Love Begins with the Hot Summer (Prologue)

LGBT+ · AmberFullMoon

Shalott

2yr

Commented

Dominik is a very brave man with a very strong heart.

ch 217 Chapter 20 Dominik's Responsibility

Love Lives in His Eyes [BL]

LGBT+ · AmberFullMoon

Shalott

2yr

Replied to AmberFullMoon

All your chapters are interesting :)

ch 208 Chapter 11 How Nowicki for the First Time Broke the Law

Love Lives in His Eyes [BL]

LGBT+ · AmberFullMoon

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