Webnovel Author: L0rdGr1m_ - Novel Collection

L0rdGr1m_

2yr

Replied to tho2

North Korea is nothing like the Scandinavian countries. I don't think you can compare socialism with them.

Hunters from the United Federation lead vastly different lives, but from what I've seen in online forums they're happy with the way things work. Of course, there are still many issues, but nowhere near as horrid as all our news networks make it out to be. Even the good things you see online could also be a false depiction though. So I guess I'd have to visit there myself to see how things are in the future

Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse

Games · Adui

L0rdGr1m_

2yr

Replied to JoSauer

I'm in the learning phase, so I highly appreciate every piece of criticism my story gets.

He yelled. They got stuck in a deadlock, and none of them seemed to budge an inch.

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Fantasy · L0rdGr1m_

L0rdGr1m_

2yr

Replied to JoSauer

Noted. Thanks for the comments, i will sit down to change and edit the story at one point, and your comments are very helpful. Thanks 😊

He yelled. They got stuck in a deadlock, and none of them seemed to budge an inch.

Solo Player Rebirth! (webnovel)

Fantasy · L0rdGr1m_

L0rdGr1m_

2yr

Replied to JoSauer

yes, vit and int determines how much you have, not levels

Health: 65 — Mana: 100

Solo Player Rebirth! (webnovel)

Fantasy · L0rdGr1m_

L0rdGr1m_

2yr

Replied to JoSauer

Not sure what you mean?

Health: 65 — Mana: 100

Solo Player Rebirth! (webnovel)

Fantasy · L0rdGr1m_

L0rdGr1m_

2yr

Replied to JoSauer

Should be said that the deadlock wasn't meant to be going on for minutes and only a few seconds. He go out of it since he could feel him losing the fight. Could have been explained better, and thanks I will take notes of every comment and improve the story :)

He yelled. They got stuck in a deadlock, and none of them seemed to budge an inch.

Solo Player Rebirth! (webnovel)

Fantasy · L0rdGr1m_

L0rdGr1m_

2yr

Replied to Liradel

I have compressed the different windows so not to have it fill everything. And when he looked at the skill before, it was the skills detail window, its where the info of the skill is.

Night Slash: Dark Type

Solo Player Rebirth! (webnovel)

Fantasy · L0rdGr1m_

L0rdGr1m_

2yr

Replied to Liradel

The story got more developed as i wrote it, and this is one of the things i changed. My story will get an major update when i have enough material, but as it is now small errors will persists through the story.

"It is! Nice!"

Solo Player Rebirth! (webnovel)

Fantasy · L0rdGr1m_

L0rdGr1m_

2yr

Replied to Liradel

its not romance tagged so don't expect it

'I think I like him.'

Solo Player Rebirth! (webnovel)

Fantasy · L0rdGr1m_

L0rdGr1m_

2yr

Posted

Let's get the big one out of the way first, the grammar is not the best. You are a new writer and English isn't your first language so you cant be blamed. The story and its characters are interesting and you are good at world-building, keep up the good work :)

Karma Of Vengeance

Action · Morororo

L0rdGr1m_

2yr

Posted

The plot is very unique, I never read anything like this before. The writing was decent, though first-person telling is not my cup of tea. Keep going and good work.

Eleanor And The Gods Of Olympus

Others · Darine_ALRAMMAH

L0rdGr1m_

2yr

Posted

Not much of any errors. The story and characters are very good, (of what I read). You are explaining everything in great detail and you really feel like you get to know everything about the world and its characters. Thanks, it's a great story!

White Lie.

Fantasy · skyerivers

L0rdGr1m_

2yr

Posted

Unique plot. The story is very well written, character and world development are at a good pace. There arent many grammatical errors either. Overall 5/5 keep going

No Love for the Wretched

History · Heather_Green672

L0rdGr1m_

2yr

Posted

The story is way more interesting than I thought when I went into it. Other than grammatical errors the story is very well writing and it's something you can be proud of author-san.

The Elusive Book Keeper

LGBT+ · Dark_Scholars

L0rdGr1m_

2yr

Posted

The story is well writing. Everything is explained beautifully and you really feel immersed in the story. The pace and development are on point too. Definitely recommends!

Irene The Lady Who Turned Down Fate

Fantasy · MayDreamer

L0rdGr1m_

2yr

Replied to MayDreamer

i been sick the last week and still am. So i slept more than writing. But i will soon get back to writing 😁

Solo Player Rebirth! (webnovel)

Fantasy · L0rdGr1m_

L0rdGr1m_

2yr

Posted

I'm not really good at reviewing things. But what I can say is, that the quality of the writing is very good. You go into great details about the world and characters which is very good. Not too much and not too little, the balance is on point.

Princess of the Silver Ocean

Fantasy · Ice_Princesss

L0rdGr1m_

2yr

Posted

I usually avoid these types of stories, but when started reading it, I couldn't stop. First of all, the grammar, punctuations, etc are on point. (I'm not native, so I might not be the best judge). But overall was it a smooth read. Second, the story and characters are well written and you really get sucked into the world the author made. Though, sometimes I lost a bit of interest in the world and characters when I read it. But that might be because it's not my kind of genre. I would recommend reading it :)