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Chaos. Meltdown.

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There are few inconsistencies in the story, some are just minor details but can be said as important Infos ( you can't really tell sometimes if it was intentional or typos ) - the mc's age changed as the story flows (the author said that it was 17 or 18 then became 16), same as his name (at the beginning of the story he used the name of the noble he reincarnated then switched into his name in his previous life. As the story flows he used aliases but also used his real name in the end. You could say that there are two different plot going on, the first half of the story starting after he reincarnated until he became a student of a rune academy (about powerful rune and becoming stronger as a sole person) and the latter part which isa about relying on his pets on becoming stronger (the runes he knew became useless as if he doesn't know it in the first place). If the author update the two parts in different story and just go as it flows it would be better. The MC is too overpower to the point that the story flows too fast. The Author also kinda forget about the minor characters ( The MC said that he cherish his friends but after entering the academy they turned into bubbles, he have a great reputation and even become the first place in a tournament but his best friend didn't even come out. The fact that his former classmates are there and his best friends' family is supporting him (he created a image of himself as an orphan from heavenly battlefield but for some reason he call his best friend's mom and sister as his mom and sister, it's kinda confusing because he intend to move their place without his best friend and he don't even think of him. It's more like replacing his best friend as a son) The World Info is kinda smoky, the civilization move back and forth between modern and not. ( the mc said that metal and modern buildings are confused as part of god ruins but in the latter part there are cars and other stuffs)
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Eliard's back for linkkkk (╥﹏╥) (/ω\)

"Shhh! Didn't you see that crest on the carriage? It's from the East Cove Magic Academy!" someone in the hall said in a low voice.

Advent of the Archmage

Advent of the Archmage

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my friend's messages were always like this😑
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