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DaoistkxGQYF

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7 days ago
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7 months, sadly it seems like my favorite fic is dead

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DaoistkxGQYF
28 days ago
Commented

Dragons in asiof are weird in that they never really had any definitive explanations for both growth and age.No problem with not granting them immortality especially so if their constantly hatching eggs

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DaoistkxGQYF
1 months ago
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In my opinion I think you should have one slightly before the doom to show the panic and preparation the family is going through

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DaoistkxGQYF
1 months ago
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Found this a couple of days ago and have really enjoyed it so far. The concept the author is using of the setting and time period being in old valariya is unique and don’t think I’ve really seen used before. The update schedule and grammar are all pretty good as well, the one thing I would slightly like to see a little more of would be the application of magic itself. Overall this has been a great story and hope author keeps up the good work

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DaoistkxGQYF
1 months ago
Commented

Thank you for the chapter 🙌

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DaoistkxGQYF
1 months ago
Commented

Hey author just started reading and I’m really enjoying it, it was a really unique idea to go into pre doom valariya. A Suggestion would be to also cross post on ffnet as well cause their in a drought when it comes to asiof fics

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DaoistkxGQYF
1 months ago
Commented

The best and most realistic way you could potentially go about it is that while viserys wife will live through the childbirth yet will be unable to have anymore children, hence goes and and marries Alicent as a consort. Both ageon and mageor had practiced polygamy and we can see the conflict that erupts from that

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DaoistkxGQYF
1 months ago
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+1

So, for people who want to choose 1 option you know the drill comment here.

Last True Remnant of Old Valyria

Last True Remnant of Old Valyria

Book&Literature · Daeranyx_Drakonar

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DaoistkxGQYF
3 months ago
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This is the one thing that the jjk author really messed up on, their should have been the inclusion of foreign sorcererers and clans. Tengens barrier is such a cop out and limits the world

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DaoistkxGQYF
4 months ago
Replied to RikuKage

Sounds good author, was just curious. Personal stuffs far more important.