Tryn_Eudo

9mth

Commented

I'm sorry, I wouldn't be able to upload a chapter. I just graduated today and I have to celebrate, so yeah, but I'll upload tomorrow.

Tryn_Eudo

1yr

Commented

Do keep it as it is. Its one of the more unique plots I have seen in a Marvel fanfic and I am enjoying it so far.

Do I keep the story as is? This will mean that a chapter will be released almost everyday. The soulmate would remain the same as is etc.

Tryn_Eudo

1yr

Commented

the moral and existential nihilism in Jasmine's ascension is nice but too much of something can be bad too. I think that there could be something that can anchor her being.

ch 235 Coffee Break

Tryn_Eudo

1yr

Commented

Pretty tame for a first-time yuri lemon scene. Thought it would be more explicit and vulgar but the scene is decent.

ch 0 4 Garden Red*

Tryn_Eudo

1yr

Commented

I think it works too. Its not that confusing and kinda cute. They're both hard-to-read women but they act like a strict mom/daughter duo.

So, let me know about the whole 'Agapi' and 'Mitera' thing. I think it works, and I quite like the sound of them. If you think they are confusing though, I will stop using them, at least as much as I did here.

The Ker: Danmachi Fanfiction

Anime & Comics · Ketsueki_Hasu

Tryn_Eudo

1yr

Posted

I'm giving a 5.0 review because I am looking forward for more updates.‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎

The Ker: Danmachi Fanfiction

Anime & Comics · Ketsueki_Hasu

Tryn_Eudo

1yr

Posted

I'm giving 5 stars because I have high hopes for this fanfic. I've been waiting for months about any updates and to read these first chapters, I'm so glad and thankful that you are trying to continue the story with your own ideas. Looking forward for new chapters!💚💚

Lost Motivation - wish I could delete

Book&Literature · Twiussy69

Tryn_Eudo

1yr

Commented

I read this is in a manga but the informal equivalent of aniki in female term is anego.

I haven't decided yet, feel free to suggest alternatives.

DxD: Mechanic's Scrapyard

Anime & Comics · Immortal_Orca

Tryn_Eudo

1yr

Replied to XavierKing_6497

+1

ch 22 More Chapters/ Less for Jin's Development?

THE LEGEND OF KORRA: ERA OF LEGACY (DISCOUNTINUE UNTIL REWRITTEN)

Others · Celectra

Tryn_Eudo

1yr

Commented

I'd say keep the system but put some focus on the world building. I think that having Jin have a prominent societal role due to being a princess should have more explanation on how they actually made their nation be recognized by the world as a whole and not something that's just passively mentioned.

• Yes System (Just Kept it the same but somethings needs to change, I'm Still not adding that Gamer Mind!)

THE LEGEND OF KORRA: ERA OF LEGACY (DISCOUNTINUE UNTIL REWRITTEN)

Others · Celectra

Tryn_Eudo

1yr

Commented

its safe to be prepared than nothing/ do nothing*

The reason I wanted to teach Ryõta, the technique is to make him strong who knows if there's an unknown enemy wanted to kill him, and also there are many enemies that grandfather offended, it safe to be prepare done nothing.

I reincarnated in the anime world

Anime & Comics · sigufo

Tryn_Eudo

1yr

Commented

Reality Manipulation huh? if her expertise on that evolves, can't she just change the imprinting altogether? Great chapter tho can't wait for more.

ch 0 6 Not everything has changed ....

Reincarnated in Twilight as Bella Swan (with a twist)

Movies · CamiRose

Tryn_Eudo

2yr

Commented

"I could only cover my ears" can replace that phrase and you should put a period instead of a comma because both sentences can stand alone.

Soon sister Lily came running apologizing to Asta for using a spell on him without thinking and Asta went back to insisting that he wanted to marry her, I could only put my mother in my ears to avoid all that fuss and continued walking towards the skull on the hill.