Webnovel Author: jesse_barrett

jesse_barrett

6mth

Commented

The title caught my eye. The formatting is killing me. The spacing doesn't read well. Some words are split between lines. If you break it down into smaller paragraphs you will get many more readers.

ch 0 1 Chapter 1: Nightmare Demon Island

jesse_barrett

6mth

Commented

If you release an extra chapter today, I'll gladly give you a review. 😂

ch 404 Soultrait Experiments

Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!

Fantasy · HideousGrain

jesse_barrett

2yr

Replied to Little_Foxxy

I greatly appreciate the review and will keep your suggestions in mind. Do you read on mobile or pc?

jesse_barrett

2yr

Commented

The story is posted twice you may want to fix that author

ch 3185 Extra Story for Commemorating Two Years – The End Is Not the End

jesse_barrett

2yr

Replied to Zostran

Thank you for the comment. For some reason, it did not upload the entire chapter when I posted it. I apologize for the inconvenience and will be verifying the upload worked in the future. I have never ran into this problem before.

ch 0 3 The Mystic Orchard

Druid Tales and Lumberjack Spells

Fantasy · jesse_barrett

jesse_barrett

2yr

Replied to 5575

Thank you for reading.

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jesse_barrett

3yr

Replied to jesse_barrett

no. not know

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jesse_barrett

3yr

Replied to jesse_barrett

I looked it up know this definitely is not a slave MC.

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jesse_barrett

3yr

Replied to TagDaReaper

I am unsure of what you mean by slave mc.

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jesse_barrett

3yr

Replied to _Neith_

Thank you for the comment and for reading. I hope you enjoy.

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I originally intended for Hadorix's shapeshifting form to be a wolf. It looks like I missed updating a few things when I changed it. I greatly appreciate you aiding me in finding and correcting the mistakes.

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Fantasy · jesse_barrett

jesse_barrett

3yr

Replied to Volianto

I greatly appreciate the fact that you commented and are reading my story. I hope you are enjoying your readthrough, and look forward to further feedback from all of my readers.