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This is a great continuation / fanfiction. It is a bit rough around the edges and obviously doesnt flow the same as original authors work, but i’m glad i get to continue the journey while we wait for the original authors work to continue …. if it ever does.

Just finished the 9th chapter. great content that helps portray a version of a continuation. My only feedback would be instead of summerizing What the characters are thinking/doing create it into a dialogue. Like the Conversation with brightblade, much of that content could have been in a conversation between the two, this would help to develop the characters more and push the content at the same time. Keep it up! I’ll be following this version for sure!

Tomvandyke! Please continue writing this novel! This story is unique and well written, while it may not be updated, I have enjoyed the story so far. With that said, this story has so mych potential! I would love to discover how this ends for the mc.

Great story giving a more realistic version of Pokemon! Im only a quarter of the way through but im curious around the MCs ability.. looking forward to reading more!

Interesting story line, I really enjoy these “system” novels. it also has a strong stroy around vampires which make it refreshing compared to more Other stories ive read.