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Sorry I mean 294 not 194

I really appreciate the time and consideration you put out for lil ol’ me, by reading my recommendations and implementing them❤️ I would say it looks much more accurate now I would just proofread for spelling/grammar errors and make sure to replace the words “nurse” with “doctor” torwards the end lf chapter 194 since you missed a few 😉 Awesome job! Keep up the good work! [img=recommend] 😘

Yeah I totally understand, procedures vary place to place, but I would assume to show that he is paying attention somewhat to Mo Roulan that he would assign a doctor than nurse so the doctor can provide a check up. Information from google is usually iffy even if it is usually an accurate website (I recommend webmd). I was taking in consideration that Fang Zhihans hospital is one of the best so the anesthetic would naturally be as well. Becuse the hospital I work in the anesthetic is really fast acting and works within 10 mins and last 15-30 mins. And my hospital is mid tiers at most. I’m rambling sorry. Fighting! [img=recommend]

Hey author, I really like this story especially since the FL is really sticking to her guns and doesn’t easily allow the ML to intrude on her life. I really like the slow burn to this book and am all for ML x FL moments. Unfortunately I have not been able to really enjoy the past two chapters about the ML’s enlightenment regarding his feelings due to a few blind-ning inaccuracies. First: Fang Zhinan asks a nurse to take care of Mo Roulan. That didn’t sit well with me especially since he is aware of how important FL is to ML. Why did he ask a nurse? Why not someone more qualified, such as a Doctor? Its not like he doesn’t have the authority as Director of the hospital. Secondly, why is a nurse applying stiches and then leaving the pt alone for 15 mins (IK she is waiting for anesthesia to kick in but that takes 1-5 mins for a local anesthetic (local anesthetic is used when applying stiches) one to kick in). If she needed to leave she could have left to grab a tray to place the bloody gauze on when she applies the stiches. The reason why I ask why a nurse is applying stiches is because nurses do not have the qualifications to apply stiches, that doctors have. I am not dissing nurses btw (they may know how apply stiches but they are not medically cleared to do that). Last but certainly not the least since this one bugged me the most, is that why is Fang Zhihan asking Chu Feng to grab medicne from the phramacy??!!!!!! They are in a hospital! All medicines are stocked in the hospital. I understand that some hospitals have their own pharmacies but certain authorization is required to access some medications. He couldn’t possibly be asking to grab over the counter medication after a surgery right, since he will need complex medications that only a hospital will have on hand. Grabbing said medications is also usually a nurses job. This detail is not mentioned so it really bothered me. My recommedation would be that: If it was neccessary to have Chu Feng to leave for a short period of time then he could have left to grab Fang’s pager that he could have possibly left in his office during all the commotion. Or coffee or even pain medication for himself since he performed an extensive surgery and he will be physically and mentally drained. Anyways, love the book and keep uo the good work!