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Agreed

I agree with you, skip the first chapter!

as I avence in the story As I want to read more. Really good writing style I can’t wait the next chapter. Keep going like thise you are talented!

Sometimes distancing the ain caracter is a good way to impliments suspence or so. I still habe to avence in the stOry totell if its a good thing or not!

Yeah

The story iS verywell structured. At the beginning You think its Boring but the turn of events buildup a suspense that make you dWant to discover more about this world.