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Mx175

Mx175

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I like writing.

2020-10-05 Joined Global

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Mx175
6mth
Replied to killerkillking1
Mmm... indeed; perhaps he is.
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Mx175
7mth
Commented
Iwill spacing

I entered the green area and saw 2 things that I will never be able to forget. I felt butterflies in my stomach and anxiety assaulted me.

Everyday Is Interesting

Everyday Is Interesting

Realistic Fiction · 64bites

Mx175
7mth
Commented
Comma, within the quotation marks.
Mx175
7mth
Commented
theycome. Spacing.

If I'm not mistaken, it was some cops who brought me here, won't they come here and ask me a bunch of questions?

Everyday Is Interesting

Everyday Is Interesting

Realistic Fiction · 64bites

Mx175
7mth
Commented
"finally some time to have peace", Shouldn't the comma be inside the quotation marks?
Mx175
7mth
Commented
Maybe in another timeline I would think There is no comma/fullstop here.
Mx175
7mth
Commented
Praised. Capital i
Mx175
7mth
Commented
Missing fullstop

1 minute later she walked away and said

Everyday Is Interesting

Everyday Is Interesting

Realistic Fiction · 64bites

Mx175
7mth
Commented
You don't have 2 middle fingers on 1 hand
Mx175
7mth
Commented
"Waiting to someone enter the room."
Mx175
7mth
Commented
Who he talking to again

My cell phone was showing the hour almost 5 pm, I don't know how long the journey on foot will take, as I said before here there's no signal, so there's no way for me to get any information on where I am now. After looking at the road map one more time on my cell phone, I turned it off and tucked it into my deeper pocket so it wouldn't get hot. Counting the time, every 30 minutes in that sun I drank a small bottle, every 1 hour I drank a big one. The weather is pretty dry, too dry even after drinking water my throat and my lips are still dry, my shirt is totally soaked so I decided to take it off for a while and then put it back on.

Everyday Is Interesting

Everyday Is Interesting

Realistic Fiction · 64bites

Mx175
7mth
Commented
on on the trip. You don't have a power switch for field trips. Commas matter.
Mx175
7mth
Commented
empity state building

After drinking non-stop the 1.5L bottle untill it was empity, I opened my backpack and placed the black box on the side, and zipped up the backpack.

Everyday Is Interesting

Everyday Is Interesting

Realistic Fiction · 64bites

Mx175
7mth
Commented
Who is he talking to again?

Already inside her car, an old Fiat Uno, we was traveling almost 3 hours straight. As I said before, I packed my suitcase almost at the last minute, but being more specific, because of the anxiety, I got distracted and forgot to pack before, so at 2 am, unable to sleep, I suddenly remembered and organized my things. Because of that I ended up waking up very late, on the trip time to be exact, so I had to skip lunch.

Everyday Is Interesting

Everyday Is Interesting

Realistic Fiction · 64bites

Mx175
7mth
Commented
Who is he talking to?

By the way, I put the black box inside my backpack.

Everyday Is Interesting

Everyday Is Interesting

Realistic Fiction · 64bites

Mx175
7mth
Commented
Called you screaming? Hello screaming I'm Mx. Commas matter.
Mx175
7mth
Commented
Still don't care about none of them. is that an accent or...

As for me, I'm just a normal young boy coming from an upper-middle class family. If I had to point out some unique characteristic of mine, I'd say I don't like people, nor my parents, they make me go to events where the whole family goes, some faces I remember from when I was younger, but I still don't care about none of them.

Everyday Is Interesting

Everyday Is Interesting

Realistic Fiction · 64bites

Mx175
7mth
Commented
Is there an extra "Enter" in this paragraph?

Maybe it was because of anger, I tried to turn away to the light stop shining in my eyes. Surprisingly, I managed, all the numb feeling I had suddenly disappeared, along with that, I felt an cool air enter my nose with a deep breath.

Everyday Is Interesting

Everyday Is Interesting

Realistic Fiction · 64bites

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