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I will try to work on the paragraph spacing. Thank you very much for your feed back UwU.

sorry didn't look at the stars I looked at comments on inkstone it doesn't show the stars. ;-;

I'll check it out and see if I can fix it. Thank you for pointing that out :)

Is that a good or a bad thing?

Aww thank you :). This review make me happy.

So far I really like it. I really want to read more and find out what happens next. Please post more soon. The writing was detailed and really got my attention making me wanna keep reading. I am hoping for a bit of character description though and maybe just a bit more description on the places. It seems like the story is very much so in the moment, but it's more relatable (and easier to read at least for me) if there is description.