Webnovel Author: Taylor_Valk - Novel Collection

Taylor_Valk

7mth

Posted

Overall, this story is amazing and worth the read; so long as you can get past the first chapters of pre knowledge. If you can, you will see that Akash is more than a worthy enough successor and won’t let any foolish obstacles deter his path. He is focused, unwavering, and won't accept anything for free. Thankfully. He is not transported to modern day Earth which is a 100% for me, cause I don't want to hear about boring affairs. But now.......this story is starting to get interesting. Can't wait for the Tamer fights. Yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhh!!!!!

Taylor_Valk

10mth

Posted

Woooooooooo!!!!!!! Now that's how you wow someone. From the synopsis, to the cover, to the drawings; and the first chapter. I love it. Keep up the great work. This story is going place

Taylor_Valk

10mth

Posted

I love this story especially being with no System. the MC is not clueless or lost at all. He quickly gains his surroundings and moves into his role. Even the secondary characters have their own way of helping and feel loved. If you want, here is another great one you can read where the action fighting is at a minimum, and its all about Kingdom building and character development, every day, every event, and no Time jumps whatsoever. Keep it up Author!!!!! https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-26-and-friends_18585770806398305 Ps, nothing is locked.

Building a Kingdom and Conquering the World

War · Stoicist

Taylor_Valk

10mth

Posted

This story starts off very very differently than others of this Genre. Which, I like; don't get me wrong. Took a bit to understand what was going on since the first few chapters were dedicated to grouping all the main characters together and setting up the backstory scene. Then spoke as to why everything was happening. I love it. Most of these stories, are set when everyone is adults; not Teens in high school, so that's a great difference. Besides a few grammar mistakes that others have pointed out, I love your thought process and story plot. Keep it up

Taylor_Valk

10mth

Commented

She's awakening out of fear. Like most do their first time

"How is she awakening so early" Nelly asked

Taylor_Valk

10mth

Commented

Eeeeeeee. She's a wherewolf

she screamed in pain immediately her eyes turned red like an alpha wolf with claws coming off her hands and she stood up like 7 feet (2.13 m) tall

Taylor_Valk

10mth

Commented

Shapeshifter. Dan da da dunn!!!

Nathan dragged eve away with the two following being behind, they only looked a few times and noticed the detective step out of his hiding and they stopped for some seconds and heard the detective telling the being to freeze and the being was now fully man when the detective stepped out of his hiding and ready to flee the moment the detective came out, they converse for some seconds with the detective pointing the gun at him and him trying to escape, all of sudden the man attacked detective Ryan and sent him flying in the air.

Extraordinary Teens

Fantasy · The_flame_prinz

Taylor_Valk

10mth

Commented

I knew it. The first person to speak up is 9/10 times the person you should be following. Just trying to cover his tracks

Eve gently followed Scott and noticed that he was at a strange place which was half dark during the day which means you could catch a glimpse of what or who is there, Scott got there then first scanned his environment to check if he was being followed then nodded to someone in the half dark place eve could seethe person face and she did a very ridiculous thing she took her phone to get the culprit's face and she forgot to turn of the flash as took the picture of the culprit both the man and Scott turned and she ran almost immediately not looking back to whether she was being chased.

Extraordinary Teens

Fantasy · The_flame_prinz

Taylor_Valk

10mth

Commented

I take it this Trio is more then meets the eye

As the trio walked out Nelly asked a question "How sure are we that she is going to need our help" "She will cause I could sense that she will awaken soon" Stella answered

Extraordinary Teens

Fantasy · The_flame_prinz

Taylor_Valk

10mth

Commented

Oh yeah. Here comes the big bad wolf ready to mess everything up

I suddenly felt someone or something was staring at me , I looked around and couldn't find anything suspicious then I slowly looked up to the top a building in the school and saw the same strange looking that I saw before gazing at me , he stared for some seconds before returning his gaze and walked towards the exit of the rooftop

Extraordinary Teens

Fantasy · The_flame_prinz

Taylor_Valk

10mth

Commented

I hate that. Please don't pick me. Please don't pick me. Please don't pick me.

She gave us few illustrations on the topic for like 30 minutes before writing a question on the board turned to the class , then scanned the class looking for someone to solve the question on the board she scanned the class for like two minutes then her eyes landed on me

Extraordinary Teens

Fantasy · The_flame_prinz

Taylor_Valk

10mth

Replied to Deborah_13

Keep up the amazing, wonderful work. You'll go far. I just know it.

NOW OR NEVER

Teen · Deborah_13

Taylor_Valk

11mth

Posted

First off, I read a story about a Panda; a frog; a dog, and even a Lilypad. Also a tree. Here's one about a Bamboo. How could I ever. Anyways, I love the story and all the others you create; but this one specifically is so engaging. It screams you 100%. Keep it up and keep making us smile. I could get lost in this book.

Reincarnated as a Bamboo with a Panda

Eastern · Snoring_Panda

Taylor_Valk

11mth

Posted

Awesome sauces. Another short story but very well crafted and put together. I felt all the characters had arches and none were stringent same old characters. Give it a read. You won't regret it.

RESIDENT EVIL - faded of twilight wings

Video Games · Scarlet_Wolf96

Taylor_Valk

11mth

Replied to Scarlet_Wolf96

Thanks for the review. I promise that it stays light but gets ton better later on. You have only just begun to know Ruby and all of her adventures of saving the Kingdom; or even that she has magical powers. No, Upfront; Kings, Queens........You missed a lot, but I thank you. *Huge virtual hug*

The 26 and friends

Fantasy · Taylor_Valk

Taylor_Valk

11mth

Posted

I'm just being honest. Don't hurt me. I liked this little, short story. At first, I thought it skipped around a lot, but then seeing explanations for what happened afterwards; in the form of flashbacks; I could appease myself. This story felt fast paced, but then I realized I was already nearing the ending. Keep it up Scarlett.

Castlevania - lost of lunar crystal

Video Games · Scarlet_Wolf96

Taylor_Valk

11mth

Commented

Yeah he finally found his horse. I was beginning to worry

Alucard and sylph chatted a bit outside. Until not long after, Alucard decided to leave. He had even summoned his horse.

Castlevania - lost of lunar crystal

Video Games · Scarlet_Wolf96

Taylor_Valk

11mth

Commented

People always have a way of defying orders and finding the one thing they are not supposed to find. We're like Lab hounds. Our nose to the ground; our ears at attention; we find anything