Webnovel Author: Below_the_current

Below_the_current

2yr

Commented

Is this an original work or a fanfic? Just curious

ch 0 1 CHAPTER 1

Below_the_current

2yr

Replied to Hannah_P_0273

Thank you so much love, it means a lot!!!! I'll work hard to keep the updates coming!!!

ch 0 8 Chapter 8 - Razor Edge

Below_the_current

2yr

Replied to Alcelinia

I am so sorry dear, it's because I'm rewriting a lot of the story! I messed up the plot and didn't add a good foundation for the story beats I had planned. AND I HATE THE MALE LEAD. Please hang in there!

An Unscrupulous system, Teaching Scum to be Loyal Husbands

Fantasy · Below_the_current

Below_the_current

2yr

Replied to sSS

I'm so sorry dear, it seems in my rush to build up the twists I didn't properly lay the foundation. Currently fixing it

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An Unscrupulous system, Teaching Scum to be Loyal Husbands

Fantasy · Below_the_current

Below_the_current

2yr

Replied to Moonfairy

I'm so sorry, i messed up the plot. There's so many plotholessss god help me. Currently I'm in the process of fixing it. Can I ask which part exactly you hate?

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An Unscrupulous system, Teaching Scum to be Loyal Husbands

Fantasy · Below_the_current

Below_the_current

2yr

Posted

Hi, so sorry about the late review, something came up and I couldn't get access to the internet. Let me begin by saying that I read so many cultivation type novels that now when I see when and it doesn't seem particularly interesting I dip and run, but your concept is really intriguing. I love it! The idea of him having to complete this ridiculous list seriously is just hilarious. And his character is soooo great. I love the his inner monologues and how sarcastic he sounds and really the way he reacts to the modern world. Just gold. In terms of writing, it reads smoothly and easily and no glaring grammatical errors. However, there is a lot of information being told to you and not shown. This is more a personal opinion, because I find it hard to concentrate on the story when there's info dumping and a lot of the time I would end up skimming over to get to the good parts. Just wanted to point it out. I didn't want to give a run of the mill review and give false praise without any feedback, so sorry it took me so long to get back to you. Anyway good work, Fighting!

Below_the_current

2yr

Commented

I love his inner thoughts!

Raizel was a little confused. Was Luca dropped on the head as a child? He was eccentric but he had never noticed that he was this crazy.

Below_the_current

2yr

Commented

Oh my god, I love the angle you're taking thissss. So funny

'That old librarian rudely refused to let me go up to the second floor of the martial pavilion. If it wasn't for the fact that I know he is probably a hidden master, would I have been so polite to him? The joke is on him, I just need to look through the broken and forgotten cultivation techniques on the first floor to find a supreme cultivation technique. When I finally show my potential, I would make him beg me to be his disciple. '

The To-Do List

LGBT+ · Dark_Scholars

Below_the_current

2yr

Commented

I really like this so far, it catches your curiosity from the beginning. Really well done. As feedback, I would say that some parts were a bit confusing and maybe the descriptions of the characters felt a little lacking, like for the main characters, not Raizel.

ch 0 1 Prologue

The To-Do List

LGBT+ · Dark_Scholars

Below_the_current

2yr

Replied to LuluoO

I think my hints were too subtle ahhh I'mmmm sorrryyy! Last chapter, basically the couple in the lobby are the female lead and Hyun. Honestly I messed up the descriptions bit too much.

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An Unscrupulous system, Teaching Scum to be Loyal Husbands

Fantasy · Below_the_current

Below_the_current

2yr

Replied to LuluoO

Ah that would be my fault...I'm doing a whole reshuffle of the chapters and the plot-line so it's really messy because Kim Han Yo just took over the spotlight and Hyun needs to go to the garbage truck.

An Unscrupulous system, Teaching Scum to be Loyal Husbands

Fantasy · Below_the_current

Below_the_current

2yr

Replied to Proteety_Promi

Ah sorry if it sounded pushy. I didn't express myself well, I didn't mean for you to use that dialogue. I was giving an example. Every character has a different voice and every writer knows what dialogue fits better, What i meant was that you could if you wanted to reveal the information about her working in the café through the dialogue.

Mom and Owen did not give me any money except to pay for the school. They would not buy me any clothes as well but expected me to wear good clothes. I worked in a nearby coffee shop and occasionally as a babysitter for a neighboring house.

The Mask Of The Monster

Fantasy · Proteety_Promi

Below_the_current

2yr

Replied to Below_the_current

the fainting

And I was right. Blackness filled my vision as I fell to the ground. But I clutched my backpack as tightly as I could. I heard another growl from the monster. But I could not open my eyes. Even if I could, I could see nothing but a vision of blackness. It always happened to me if I saw something I feared a lot.