really my only complaint is that the translation is rough! But even that isn't bad just mediocre! over all congratulations on a great story!
I believe there is a typo here maybe but I believe the second use of the name "fez" should actually be "Logan" I apologize if I'm wrong
There was one place that they would be at tonight without fail and that was the student's names Fex. Before leaving Fex grabbed a round ball-like object and started making some adjustments with his mechanical glove.
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to be honest it was such a minor inconvenience as to be negligible that was just the only thing I thought that could possibly improve the writing ...ps thank for the response I think this is the first response from a writer that wasn't either outright or borderline monosyllabic
I loved this story really the only complaint I could possibly have is I feel like it needs to be proof read one more time for small typos other than that I hope there is a sequel
this book is great it's a fairly quick read but the characters are rich and Interesting with just a drop of romance just enough to say it's there with out affecting the story
A great story thats well written and easy to follow. Full of characters you want to know more about! I simply cannot wait for more. What other powers are there?
simply fantastic it's full of everything action, adventure, romance, intrigue and a TALKING crow! I'm mean come on what more could you possibly need?
more more more! can't get enough!
did the translator fall asleep on the job?
至于地主逊尼人倒是和人类一族差不了许多,唯有两点区别,一点是脑袋,一个个呈椭圆形,瘦长而圆润,其次是耳朵,仿佛在脑袋上插了两只春卷,支愣着,除此以外无论是眼睛还是鼻梁,都和人类再无两样.
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