Vina_VDW - Profile

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The writing quality is good. though, it’s confusing to me how the author updates two times a week and manages to get this much fans. yes, in all consideration, she’s not feeling well, but as i’ve heard, other writers still write whether or not they’re sick, and rumors say that this book was hyped up with bots.

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Shouldn’t you get an editor or something? You are a contracted author, aren’t you?

Didn’t you say you’re not good at English?

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Grammar’s quite faulty, but other than that. The book is thrilling and interesting to read. I suggest you fix your grammar though. [img=recommend]

I always give honest reviews, and the fact that the grammar here is quite faulty, peeves me to the max. No hate, this is only criticism. [img=faceslap]

Good book! Some grammar mistakes but overall, the book’s interesting and somewhat realistic in some aspects. Congrats on winning the WPC #137!