Badges 1
Moments 17
3yr
Replied to Fangwei_Shi Someone agrees with me 😶
ch 0 1 Break up with girlfriends
Journey To Become A True God
Eastern · DarkForces
3yr
Commented Can’t wait till I can get the rest of the book!
ch 87 Shattering the Tranquility
Mesmerizing Ghost Doctor
Fantasy · Feng Jiong
3yr
Commented I like your writing style, and the plot so far.
ch 0 2 His perfect scheme
President's Pampered First Love
Urban · lizmorgan
3yr
Commented Why was I so unlucky today, first my girlfriend broke up with me, and now I’m being chased by (a grandfather ghost) or (the ghost of a grandfather)
Not criticizing, just saying it’s a little easier to read this way, at least for me.
Ye Chen Running Down the grass "motherfucker, why today I was so unlucky, First I broke up with my girlfriend and now I'm being chased by the ghost of the old grandfather" Ye Chen kept cursing in his heart.
Journey To Become A True God
Eastern · DarkForces
3yr
Commented I would suggest rewriting this chapter with someone versed in English grammar, it’s a little hard to read at times, and I’m not sure which tense (past, present, future,) you meant to use, but I believe you used all three, however it’s a good story so far, and I think I will continue to read.
ch 0 1 Break up with girlfriends
Journey To Become A True God
Eastern · DarkForces
3yr
Commented Hooray! More dragons! Even if they are evil.
ch 88 Episode 28: Stalling the Wyverns
Chat Group For Magicians
Fantasy · Kyosei
3yr
Replied to Imperatriz Why did you write a review with only emojis?
3yr
Commented Interesting, I like how blunt iris is.
ch 49 Goodnight Kiss
His Genius Wife is a Superstar
Urban · ArriaCross
3yr
Commented I like the ‘chat’ you add, it adds another dimension, another perspective.
ch 44 Eat Your Slippers
His Genius Wife is a Superstar
Urban · ArriaCross
3yr
Commented Well done.
ch 29 I Forbid You to Kiss Other Men
His Genius Wife is a Superstar
Urban · ArriaCross
3yr
Commented What a lovely song, have you tried to make a melody for it?
ch 13 The Phantom of Your Love
His Genius Wife is a Superstar
Urban · ArriaCross
Nicky_9070
Seeing this, Feng Jiu comforted her: "Although the wound on his back is deep, fortunately the blood had dried up or else the journey here which takes about four hours would have already taken away his life. As for his feet, it's just some skin trauma, with the proper care and medication, he'll recover in a couple of days, there's no danger."
Mesmerizing Ghost Doctor
Fantasy · Feng Jiong