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says the level one daoist.

The story is good and all but, author should have put slow-paced tag unto the description tags. Great grammar and smooth flow of sentences. Nothing out of place or forced so far. Also, I almost forgot about the system, though it'll never come. This is my review, that's all.

You wrong though. Its just competition between countries. It's not like the author is downplaying other countries. Well balance if I say so myself.

A great novel, new and interesting ideas. Clean grammar and sentences. Not much racism bs but proper competition. All in all, a thumbs up for the author. Hope this gets chosen.

M this is my review after reading for a while now, your story has a great start. With smooth grammar with few little mistakes when using proper words, all is good until you dicided to go with the common trope, 8 of 10 one piece fan fics out there go with having some of luffys crew into theirs. Turning this great fic into that of a meh, or barely good enaugh. If you want to have something that is popular, atleast go with something original. One piece world's is big and diverse. That's all.

I'm a bit weirded out because you can't see those haters commonly seen in every novel. 😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔

Author should have made him recall their memories bit by bit so that his power ups can be controlled.

I know, but it's a different story if the one your selfish from is you family. I can understand if it's someone else but that's not the setting though.

No English translation?. Wew. 😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😑😑😑😑😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒

Your such a selfish b*stard eh.

My review till the tatest chapter. (10) The plot was good, atleast it makes sense and unique. The grammar was great, there isn't that many of a mistake. The characters has life into it, the type you can read them with a color(metaphor). Keep writing and I'll give you my support.

And also before I forgot, I like your other novel, start by becoming a mangaka more because he atleast comes face to face with his women every now and then, shame you ended it too fast.

My review till chap 1320. The trope of him getting girls are now being repitetive. The story is getting boring. The grammar needs some more work. The love romance department now makes me cringe. The saving grace is how they go into other stories. The group chat characters are now almost forgotten especially the males. You should end this novel and create a new one again. This has become to bland for my taste so I'm dropping this and wait for a new novel. Thanks for the chapters BTW.

Author should start another novel, this one is getting repetitive and bland. 📖📖📖📖📖📖👆👆👌👌🙏🙏👍👍👍👍👍🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑

This is my review and as a support to the author. The character design is good, nothing seems to forced so far in the romance department. Keep up the good work and keep writing.