Nightstrider - Profile

This has so far been a great read and I can't wait for new chapters! There are some spelling and grammatical problems, but I'm not one to complain as I have my own problems in grammar. The story did run a bit fast between the ages 5 & 15, but has been at a steady pace in the mid to later chapters. I don't know if you plan on having a relationship develop between Ray and Sylvia, but I think It would be a nice touch and prove that he does in-fact care for the humans (even if they are only certain ones). I think it would also be nice to after the tournament to gain some allies (other kingdoms). I also think another fight between Morfran and Ray would be cool, maybe even Morfran's defeat which leaves the leader of the Dark Guild slot open for Monk which then can be used to merge the dark guild and Redwings (Keeping the Redwings name and ideals of-course). We also have not seen anything about Gary? maybe a couple chapters like you did for Monk would be nice. This has been a great book and I'm excited to see what you do. :D

This is definitely a great read and I'd recommend this to everyone. I am slightly disappointed with the updating schedule, but understand that everyone has a life. I would like to see some "Paragon of Destruction" action (Maybe a breakthrough with his destruction realm...). I would also like to see MC find some more realm portals (Maybe fire?). It also seems that whenever MC finds a girl either nothing develops or she ends up leaveing (Maybe he can finally find a girlfriend?). Over all this is a GREAT book and I can't wait to see more chapters... ~Nightstrider

I'm fairly new to the "World Domination System" series, but have been engrossed this last week and really did enjoy the story. I appreciate you writing especially during this hard time and hope to see many more chapters and in the future to see hard-cover versions. ~Nightstrider