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Incredible story , Incredible Writing Quality , Incredible main character and , most of all , Incredible Logic Development ! Detail : That's Young Justice , a cartoon, which started out a little fun and got boring and repetitive over time , even though it's DC , it should be posted in the Fanfics catalog on TV .

This story really disappointed me! Batman is TOTALLY irrational and the Justice League justifies this behavior for anything (He literally tried to KILL the MC in Chapter 7 , and failed by very little and still says that was the right thing just because he didn't know who the MC was, with her friends justifying it), the Justice League revealed her secret identity to her mother and justified it with the classic "You gave us no choice" with the sad look. F%CK . For Batman to want to arrest the MC just because he COULD mean a risk is too much of a stretch even for a deliberately repulsive story about Young Justice or any other DC universe. It's absurd and focused mostly on the worst aspects of the characters in the comics that just showed up there because of bad writing.

O protagonista é legal , a história é ótima e mandou um grande "FODA-SE" para a moralidade distorcida autojustificada dos super-heróis da DC Comics . Parabéns

FINALLY FUCKING! Finally a fanfic in which the protagonist is not resigned to being a punching bag just because he saw comics and live-action adaptations of these fucking freaks. Seriously, ALL superheroes at some point have extremely immoral and misanthropic behavior, but almost every fanfic I've read so far has the MC trying to make excuses for it, even when he himself is the target of this antics. Congratulations !

Ótima história , é envolvente e mostra uma reação mais realista aos tipos de absurdos completamente ridículos e estúpidos que universos ficcionais como os da Marvel continua à mostrar . Foi exatamente para esse tipo de realidade ambientadas em versos de "Herói vs. Vilão" que eu comecei a ler fanfics em primeiro lugar .

Excelente novel , gostei da construção de mundo e do modo como ele muda outros universos além do Universo Marvel . Só dei um 4,8 por causa da demora para novos capítulos .

This story is good , but it 's still at the beginning . If it improves , I delete this review and make another one . I want to ask the Author a question: Why did he make us "resistant" to bullets? When Two-Face shot him, he received the bullet in much the same way as a normal badass in the DC Universe. I simply hate the illogicality of these stories: A character, totally superhuman and capable of withstanding attacks that would liquefy an ordinary Human with only, at most, a few bruises on his body but at the same time being totally vulnerable to shots from ordinary pistols. . It just never made sense! Other than that , good start to the story .

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At first I didn't really like the story because of infantilizing the characters, but I checked the source material (Both the DC comics and the Young Justice cartoon) and I was really shocked by the characters being even MORE childish and hypocritical than what is shown in this Fic . I really enjoyed all of the Lampshades about superheroes' hypocrisy and misguided sense of importance, that despite them being very important in this verse, they seem to think that everything they do is totally justified by the fact that it's THEM that's doing it, no no matter how many laws they choose to ignore and on top of that trying to make it look like they "Follow the Book" as if they were literally police in costume! All in all, I think it's a great story for anyone looking to take a break from DC's self-righteous and delusional bullshit, but not good for anyone who just wants a fun story to relax, especially since you're almost certain to be VERY mad at many. characters trying to screw with the MC just because they can't control him!