Webnovel Author: DreamSeeker_Lord

DreamSeeker_Lord

3yr

Replied to Potato_daoist

Maybe it was so fast that Kurama didn't get to see him haushasuhusha

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DreamSeeker_Lord

3yr

Commented

Please author, pay more attention to mc's personality, I feel like the ending of this chapter is a little off what you've shown us so far, doesn't really match with him/her.

ch 25 Chapter 25

DreamSeeker_Lord

3yr

Replied to your_Daddy

But it was day for me... (´；ω；｀)

But before she could Shigeo sighed and took the flower out of her hands getting a confused look from her. He then gently put the flower behind her ear as he looked at the girl. "You shouldn't cry from something like that. Besides you would be more charming if you smiled"

Shinobi Life!

Anime & Comics · UchihaFanatic

DreamSeeker_Lord

3yr

Replied to your_Daddy

But before she could Shigeo sighed and took the flower out of her hands getting a confused look from her. He then gently put the flower behind her ear as he looked at the girl. "You shouldn't cry from something like that. Besides you would be more charming if you smiled"

Shinobi Life!

Anime & Comics · UchihaFanatic

DreamSeeker_Lord

3yr

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Ah, I see, so you aren't a man of culture.

But before she could Shigeo sighed and took the flower out of her hands getting a confused look from her. He then gently put the flower behind her ear as he looked at the girl. "You shouldn't cry from something like that. Besides you would be more charming if you smiled"

Shinobi Life!

Anime & Comics · UchihaFanatic

DreamSeeker_Lord

3yr

Replied to Ryuu23

not really, this is actually freedom to bullshit around as much as he want, because no one would actually know the truth.

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Instant Mastery In Harry Potter (English)

Book&Literature · Memonic

DreamSeeker_Lord

3yr

Commented

is everyone there midgets?

After Shigeo headed to his apartment to get changed he couldn't help but look at himself in the mirror. He was only eleven and he was 4'8 while most of the boys his age was 4'5-4'6 while the girls were even shorter.

Shinobi Life!

Anime & Comics · UchihaFanatic

DreamSeeker_Lord

3yr

Commented

My disappointment is unmeasurable, and my day is ruined.

But before she could Shigeo sighed and took the flower out of her hands getting a confused look from her. He then gently put the flower behind her ear as he looked at the girl. "You shouldn't cry from something like that. Besides you would be more charming if you smiled"

Shinobi Life!

Anime & Comics · UchihaFanatic

DreamSeeker_Lord

3yr

Commented

I know how you feel, but don't let it bother you, just keep up with your job, I can't say it is my favorite fic, but I have liked it so far. (although I would have really liked if the mc was into guys since he/she is now a woman, but I understand it won't happen) Anyway, good luck Author-San, I will be reading this fic until you drop it or finish it.

[A/N: Ok, allow me to make a little noise here before we dive on to the chapter. I have seen a few reviews and comments and i had intended on ignoring the negativity but just let me say something real quick. Most that i see are mostly people trashing the fanfic because something was changed or is different from the original. Allow me to say IT'S A FRIGGING FANFIC. What's the point of it being a fanfic if as an Author, we cannot change things. If you want nothing to change then go read the original manga. Second, some seem to hate the fact that in the first few chapters the MC is not already eating dragon flesh and pulling down skies. There are a lot of other novels and fanfics out there with that kind of plot; I could even recommend a few if you like. Reading a novel or fanfic means to follow the MC on his wise, dumb and ugly journey. That is what reading is, not what you want the MC to do. If that is what you want, then write yours; Very simple. Some are just plain hating the novel just because it is Sakura. To them i say; Grow up. My MC is not some reborn Uchiha clan member or some Uzumaki or some Senju. My MC is Haruno Sakura, Civilian Born. I am using the abilities Kishimoto-sensei gave to her and writing based on mine and my friends' theories with my own added twists. If you dont like it, just quit reading. Thank you all for your time, the comments and constructive criticisms. Thank you for reading this. Enjoy the chapter]

I became Haruno Sakura?

Anime & Comics · Carl_Joe

DreamSeeker_Lord

3yr

Commented

****, I literally fell on the ground because of this paragraph, I almost thought he had become a real woman and would kiss him or something.

"Shannaro!" I had no idea what happened, I only felt a snap and sudden urge that I happily obliged, and before I knew it, I had landed a monstrous punch, sending Naruto rolling and sliding a few meters away. Before he knew what was happening, I was already on him as I grabbed him by his silly orange jacked and pulled him real close to my face.

I became Haruno Sakura?

Anime & Comics · Carl_Joe

DreamSeeker_Lord

3yr

Commented

I think this isn't realistic at all, all those kids training to be shinobi are probably way more trained then even the adults in real life, after all they have the magic factor influencing their bodies, an example of this is wall walking, the amount of strength one would need to keep it self in a standing position like Kakashi and others do all the time is extremely high.

How was this even possible? This was the body of an eleven-year-old. Aside that, I know the academy takes them through physical exercises, including spars. So, then why? Was this like Re-life with Arata Kaizaki still being tired as an old man during P.E. even after being regressed into a teenager? (If you have not seen it, try and find it. One of the best slice-of-life Animes I've seen). Or did Sakura truly waste six years of her academy life fangirling over Sasuke?

I became Haruno Sakura?

Anime & Comics · Carl_Joe

DreamSeeker_Lord

3yr

Commented

As a fellow author, I feel like I should comment on the issue here, if you are going to write a first person story, don't suddenly change the point of view to that of third person omniscient view, it doesn't make sense and it breaks the immersion specially because, it changes how the reader approaches the characters in a unnatural way. If needed, I suggest you to watch some of reedsy and quotodian videos on YouTube, to get some tips on how to write.

"Oh Sakura, didn't you need to study?" She asked without turning her head. She already knew how her daughter was, and it was even worse now that she was in her rebellious stage. She watched as her daughter walked over to help unpack the groceries. This surprised her quite a bit as the daughter she knew would rather stay in her room away from her.

I became Haruno Sakura?

Anime & Comics · Carl_Joe

DreamSeeker_Lord

3yr

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Doesn't matter, Hiruzen only sneaked peaks on important characters, not useless girls whose only purpose was to have a crush on the antagonist making the protagonist feel bad.

"Noo! Take me back! At least send me to 'Shokugeki no soma', I want to cook instead, send me to Baki. Hell, even 'death note'. It's much safer compared to here, just take me away from here!" Lifting my head and screaming at the ceiling, tears beginning to flow down my cheeks.