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The quality of this web novel is so highly, this could have been a hard copy published novel! some chapters made me laugh, some made me smile, I loved the ride throughout! It really made me feel like I was part of the story [img=recommend]

Edit: I thought this story hadn't been completed , but it was actually up on the author's social media! I am really looking forward to more action between Nate and Marissa! The writing quality of this story isn't the great. there are many spelling errors and some names get mixed up by the author as well. If you are willing to look past these issues, then (with a little imagination) this story is still okay to read. The character design is pretty good. the characters have depth and backstories. I would have like to know about Nate's age a bit earlier in the story, tho. I was imagining a man in his thirties or fourties, only to find out later he was just 28. The story moves on at quite a nice pace. Different parts of the story (the sexy times and the other times) are equally interesting, although I wish scenes were a bit longer. The setting was great and described well! I could really pictured the lovely coastal village. Very cute!

I see! thank you for letting me know! [img=recommend]