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What's the point of a character dying if it doesn't have any impact? The fact that the character had potential and could grow makes the death more meaningful narratively as well as emotionally for the reader.

I have mulled over what to write into this white little box for a long bit of time now and I have made my decision. Although I have written and deleted texts many times, I have yet to be satisfied with my attempt at putting my feelings for this novel into words. That is why after much consideration I have come to a single conclusion. This is my Bible now. It is as qualified a holy book as any.

One of the best novels I have read on this site/app. It is well thought out to the point where I think the author searches the entire internet every time he needs a new monster. The characters that matter aren't 1 dimensional garbage and the writing is great and the author seems to put a lot of thought into word choice which I appreciate. The world background is good, but as of chapter 75 most of the interactions related to higher powers are scarce and the story is more supernatural than fantasy. The story development is still in the earliest stages but I still enjoy it a good bit and it seems like there are plenty of things to look forward too. The only reason I didn't give it a 5 star is because the author has trouble updating consistently. It is understandable since he is doing a lot of work on each chapter and trying to keep a schedule would be the same as saying "please rush your process and give us something that you don't want to put out because of time constraints" and I would rather have good writing. I rate it 4.8 out of 5 stars, but with time and someone else to share the work with I would change it to 5 stars. Thank you for the chapter Mr. author, keep finding obscure fantasy creatures and I'll keep dumping power stones.

It only gets better with time. The main characters are relatively fleshed out, but the side characters and second rate villains are a cringe worthy level of 1 dimensional. However, that doesn't affect the fact that I love the actual story. The story development and buildup throughout makes up for it 10 fold. If you get through the first 50 or so chapters the then everything after is great storytelling.