Crazy_potatoes

3mth

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Within the interrogation room. Erix was currently sitting with a handcuff in his hands having been brought by the justice league as precaution seeing he was a bigger threat than Darkseid himself!

Crimson Monarch: Endless Journey.

Anime & Comics · ChesterCure

Crazy_potatoes

7mth

Replied to Azoroth

You're welcome and your fanfic is interesting btw.

As I extended my hand, a familiar sensation enveloped us, the magic of teleportation whisking us away from the throne room to the enigmatic realm of the 11th. In that fleeting moment, I cast a last glance towards Momonga, a silent promise that together, we would confront the mysteries that awaited us.

Overlord : God of Darkness

Anime & Comics · Azoroth

Crazy_potatoes

7mth

Replied to Azoroth

and please if you want to enrich your vocabulary and literature then place this on the literature section of webnovel to note the reader, thank you.

As I extended my hand, a familiar sensation enveloped us, the magic of teleportation whisking us away from the throne room to the enigmatic realm of the 11th. In that fleeting moment, I cast a last glance towards Momonga, a silent promise that together, we would confront the mysteries that awaited us.

Overlord : God of Darkness

Anime & Comics · Azoroth

Crazy_potatoes

7mth

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I meant no offensive words btw, but on how things that you write on those very specific lines like, ex: " i grab him in the hand, the smooth yet rough skin of his hand that endure countless hours of work, left me with awe and admiration to him" see to me if i'm not aware of his gender the people will mistaken him to be a girl. that's what i'm saying to much dramatic words on too little action will be boring to read and it's becoming annoying really it's not a Shakespeare book to be a dramatic, But town it down a little bit it's more interesting to be specific in battle scenes. And you didn't write it in your synopsis that you intend to sharpen your vocabulary....

As I extended my hand, a familiar sensation enveloped us, the magic of teleportation whisking us away from the throne room to the enigmatic realm of the 11th. In that fleeting moment, I cast a last glance towards Momonga, a silent promise that together, we would confront the mysteries that awaited us.

Overlord : God of Darkness

Anime & Comics · Azoroth

Crazy_potatoes

7mth

Replied to The_Blind_Bandit

and by any means don't add the word "not" if you already use the word "don't" cause it will be like this "do not not"..

Kahn: (raising an eyebrow) "Pirates, huh? Might as well give 'em a little fireworks show. Shell 'em."

One Piece : Earning One Trillion Berries Before Retiring

Anime & Comics · KLNovel

Crazy_potatoes

7mth

Commented

it seems like the mc is the wife of momonga the way of describing it... too many dramatic words for being lazy to describe the stats of the MC. just "NOD" is fine author.

As I extended my hand, a familiar sensation enveloped us, the magic of teleportation whisking us away from the throne room to the enigmatic realm of the 11th. In that fleeting moment, I cast a last glance towards Momonga, a silent promise that together, we would confront the mysteries that awaited us.

Overlord : God of Darkness

Anime & Comics · Azoroth

Crazy_potatoes

7mth

Commented

sounds gayy

"Exactly," I replied, offering a reassuring mental nod. "We'll face this head-on, step by step. Together."

Overlord : God of Darkness

Anime & Comics · Azoroth

Crazy_potatoes

7mth

Commented

where?

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Overlord : God of Darkness

Anime & Comics · Azoroth

Crazy_potatoes

7mth

Replied to Azoroth

?? where?

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Overlord : God of Darkness

Anime & Comics · Azoroth

Crazy_potatoes

7mth

Posted

yoo author just came here to say that i dropped this fanfic a while ago then see that you updated so i checked it to see if there's improvement to the mc then checked the comments and guess what i see this reader AnRa dunno if its correct and it's very accurate!! you just make soooo weak and pathetic that knows SUN WUKONG strength to this little s***... then to add to the already horrible strength he's in YOU even make it that "you're worthy" thing to use staff, etc, to use his powers that he owns like wtf bruhh give me a break... this isn't thor he's sun wukong i bet stronger than thor! and IF you make it that he can wield it if the person is worthy of the staff "that he is worthy" already why can colossus lift it? even thor's hammer cannot be wielded by anybody? huh that some rule bending s*** i read for a while now. Soooo good luck on your fanfic cause people will find this absurd to the point that "NOT WORTH READING" and has brain aneurysm itself.

Monkey King in Marvel

Anime & Comics · InconclusiveGlory

Crazy_potatoes

7mth

Replied to King_of_Dogs

you go first

"get your ass up and plant that fence down before I whip your dirty ass nigg-"

Demented psycho through the multiverse

Anime & Comics · Lustful_Death

Crazy_potatoes

9mth

Posted

No offence but........WHAT THE FUCK IS THISSS!!!?

TENSURA: the slutty slime chan

Anime & Comics · imre_amon

Crazy_potatoes

9mth

Posted

I'm shocked that this fic got deleted without prior notice or if it will be rewritten or not then i just removed this in my library, just shocked that i see this fic again.

Mortals' Delight: A DxD X Multiverse fanfic

Anime & Comics · Ren_Hwa

Crazy_potatoes

9mth

Commented

they don't bow they use guns....jwk

The female police officer immediately bowed slightly quite politely before heading towards the police car parked by the roadside and leaving to continue her patrol.

My Yandere girls in Marvel

Anime & Comics · DogLickerGods

Crazy_potatoes

9mth

Commented

too much info dump in every single chapter that you will be bored to read....i dunno if when will it start the story already...

ch 0 8 Shin'ō Academy

Shinigami Of The Marvel World

Anime & Comics · Cosmic_phantom_19

Crazy_potatoes

9mth

Commented

the pic that the author picks is not what you call ethereal charm and perfectly balanced masculinity...it's the pure face of a brute or a gang leader, seriously at least pick a more reasonable face of what you're describing...

After some exploration, Blake found himself in a chamber adorned with a shimmering mirror. Curiosity compelled him to approach, and as he gazed on it, he saw his own handsome face which possesses a perfect balance of masculine features and ethereal charm, captivating anyone who gaze upon it.

Shinigami Of The Marvel World

Anime & Comics · Cosmic_phantom_19

Crazy_potatoes

10mth

Commented

"You drew our attention on you and let her take the box, you sure are Cunning." Doflamingo turned green, he can't let this mission failed, he doesn't want face the warth of kaido.

The Strongest Pirate Crew

Anime & Comics · Y_S_Gaming

Crazy_potatoes

10mth

Posted

Very interesting story btw author san keep up the good work and please don't drop this fanfic!!!!

Starting The Group Chat With Solo Players

Anime & Comics · Door_kun

Crazy_potatoes

10mth

Commented

we can see already that she is a goddess no need to describe it very often, and why not just skip it if she is so powerful already make it like a time skip where she's on the floor 30 etc.and meet the protagonist cause it's useless to describe the whole tutorial arc. it's like you just make it to have word count, seriously it's your (A/N) that has a lot in every chapter like bruhhh..

(N\A: guys the tests do not have a major difficulty is because they remember that it is a tutorial for the players and obviously since they are novices they will not put them from the beginning to kill a dragon. In addition, Shiro is a goddess and not a player, so those tests are only a child's game for her).