oni_latte

3yr

Posted

I'll just say i read this instead of paying attention in class cuz it's really magical, really well made and overall it's perfect!! keep it up!!!

oni_latte

3yr

Posted

there's nothing to say other than, i want to be in that world... it's magnificent!!! i love it!!! [img=update][img=update][img=update] keep it up!!!

oni_latte

3yr

Posted

the synopsis is really good, it's catchy. when it comes to the story as it is, the first few chapters feel rather heavy and overwhelming, the characters feel a bit plain too, but with the development of the story they start gaining volume and become for tridimensional. overall it is a good story. though i would have loved to see distributing details more evenly throughout the story and catching little details later on, rather than being told how the characters are right away. keep it up

oni_latte

3yr

Posted

The writing is ok, but I can't separate the dialogs from the narrative, i can't identify the change between characters and I cant understand what's happening. the story is good once you pay attention, but it's hard to tell. keep up, don't give up!

oni_latte

3yr

Posted

i can't understand the universe yet, but the story is interesting, the writing does lack a bit of polishing but is good. the main character seems a bit overpowered but Its ok. good job overall

oni_latte

3yr

Posted

THIS IS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING! I feel bad for MC (cuz i havent read her name yet) but it feels desply relatable. sO much that somehow it hurts. great woek author![img=update][img=update]

oni_latte

3yr

Posted

i love the characters a lot!! they are absolute dumbasses but I love em!!! the story is also awesome, this goes to my reading!!! keep up the good work!!!

oni_latte

3yr

Commented

i find it funny that Author censors the cuss words

ch 0 1 Love at first sight

oni_latte

3yr

Posted

kts a really good story, the first chapters are quite confusing for me but as you keep reading you catch up the tiny details . keep up the good work!!

oni_latte

3yr

Posted

THE VOCABULARY IS IMMACULATE, THE WRITING PERFECT AND CATCHING, AND OH SO TRUTH SPEAKING. I FUCKING ADORE IT AND IT SPEAKS FOR ITSELF, I LOVE IT

oni_latte

3yr

Posted

This tupe of storis aint my cup of tea, but this oNe is really well written! Contrats author-chan! keep up the good work!! [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

oni_latte

3yr

Commented

Nice.... YOU ACTUALLY USED THE SPANISH PROPERLY!!

“ I’ll try my best,” I said before heading to the barn. At the entrance was a man in his late sixties, wearing typical farm attire. Looking at him you’d never guess he was a successful professional wrestler in his prime, wrestling as the luchador Asesino Silencioso. He had retired nearly a decade ago and ran a small wrestling school for his independent promotion on his farm located a few miles outside Laurel Montana.