Izanmi - Profile

My only problem is the performance of the mc. He mimics Black's style due to his identity as Tenryubito, but was it necessary to mimic Bigmom's traits even when their experiences are totally different? I just hope that the mc has his own personality and not an amalgamation of various characters. (Google translate)

Thanks for the chapter!!

I know, as the author said this ff is wish-fulfilment; but what I mean is that in most fanfics the MCs let Orochimaru live. I read one where the MC was a Saiyan but Orochimaru still used his DNA to make clones and stuff like that. It's probably because I'm a bit paranoid when it comes to scientists. (Google translate)

Thanks for the chapter! This is a personal opinion: I don't like it very much when the mc of any naruto fanfic lets Orichimaru live when he has the chance to kill him. Characters like Orochimaru are very insidious and difficult to predict. I know that as a scientist he is very valuable but unless the mc can control him I think getting rid of him is the best option. For example, the final sentence of the chapter is like some kind of 'Flag' that foreshadows some kind of event that will negatively affect the mc or his loved ones. (Google translate)

The forced plots have already begun! I mean, just as the mc sends clones all over the world in search of his clan members, why doesn't he think of leaving several clones in the village to supervise when he's not around? This situation with Kushina was easily avoided but due to the 'plot' it ended up happening just like in the original story. Hopefully the author creates better plot twists in the future and not something as clichéd as this. Thanks for the chapter! (Google translate)

I only hope that in the next chapters we will see a better development of the mc, because until now he has not proven to be the genius of his past life. I mean, during this 'conflict' with the Straw Hats he wasn't very smart at all., from the beginning it was obvious that luffy and the others weren't going to have a good impression of him. Thanks for the chapter! (Google translate)