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Overall, the concept of this novel/fanfic is pretty good. Its refreshing to see new and like a unique take to MHA. But, there's one thing that you kinda overlooked. So songs are usually taken from the feelings of the writers, their experiences in life, and what have they gone through in life whether from their own experience or grom observing wjha they see on their surroundings. Taking note of that, I can't seem to imaging the adults of this novel to just say its so cool that you've written a very good song. Don't you think they would've gind it weird that a kid is talking about love and whatnot in his songs? So while I love it, its's hard, for me at least, as I was always told that songs or poems are taken written with your heart and experience, I was always told that these are the expression of what you are. So again, the concept is good, but the execution of the character being able to write songs about being in love and all is quite hard to read. It would make it more realistic somewhat if you made the MC more mature before publishing songs.That's all, let me think about my review. Anyways this us just an opinion of mine. Thanks