Webnovel Author: Anonny_Anonymous - Novel Collection

I don’t like this hand waving of making impossible barriers as if she’s making a bowl of microwave popcorn. That sounds like something that would take decades of study and it’s not likely possible even from a master of barriers. A barrier that constantly shifts? Sounds unstable.

It’s forced plot.

Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique Not a genjutsu. Genjutsu requires infecting another’s chakra network in order to influence their perception of reality. Bunshin doesn’t need to manipulate another’s chakra network in order to work. So it’s definitely a ninjutsu.

I highly doubt that Yamanaka was taught sensory techniques as like a 5 or 6 year old.

There’s no risk in overtraining physically in the world of Naruto. Rock Lee, Dai Maito, and Gai have all proven this. To a lesser extent, so did Obito. He had a whole training montage when he lived in the village and would constantly overtrain and was fine. Kakashi was practicing as a shinobi when he was like 3 or 4. I hate when authors use overtraining as an excuse. Chakra will help you recover from most things.

You are correct. Unlocking chakra is purely fanon.

There is no such thing as a space-time affinity. That’s purely fanon. Hiraishin is a sealing technique of the space-time variety, but it doesn’t require an affinity for space-time to use it. That’s nonsense.

The OCs in this fic are annoying.

I would drop the course and refuse to attend. I’d demand self-study. Show the memory of the course to your parents. Let’s see how they’d react.

And I say OC because even though he’s a canon character, he’s nothing like James Potter. Everything he does feels incredibly forced and inorganic. He might as well be a new character.

Why does he act so immature? He’s basically just an OC at this point and not a self-insert. His previous life’s memories have no influence on his behavior.

I’m so sick of MCs who pass out powers to other people.

Way to ruin the story. Having some hanger-on/worthless female who contributes nothing but reaps all the rewards. He’s an idiot for revealing anything to her in the first place.

I don’t like Goku Black showing up in the Fate universe. It’s annoying and stupid.

He needs to seal the body away and destroy any DNA left at the scene. This is just begging for a reanimation jutsu opportunity.

Yes! Thanks for killing him. I’m sick of fics that won’t kill canon characters. Most authors would just leave him alive so he could be captured by the Akatsuki to hurry the plot along the canon timeline. Glad you didn’t go that route.

Why didn’t he just travel deep underground? Underground projection fish technique. It was literally shown in the first few episodes of Naruto by Kakashi

The MC makes me laugh with his masochistic tendencies.

Unable to disclose his future insights? Sure, but he can literally just do a Google search. There were allegations against him in the 90s. Seth MacFarlane even joked about Harvey publicly at awards show years before his arrest. Don’t let the “I can’t disclose the future” thing stop you from due diligence. If he wanted to, he could even just reach out to the women who worked on projects in which he was the executive producer and start collecting evidence to put the stop to him now. It might even be able to prevent #metoo from being as ridiculous as it was.