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The first few chapters had me thinking I recognised this from somewhere, and then I remembered another story on webnovel called Scholars Advanced Technology System. In the end, I enjoyed reading all 1500 chapters from that one, but I'm stopping here on C16 because these characters just don't interest me.

Alright, so the story has a bit of an odd premise, but I can get down with it. Interesting universe, I liked it. But the characters are just tasteless. If more though was put into the characters, dialogue and interactions, then I think this could have potential. But from what I've seen, the Author is a bit of an oddball.

Garbage. I read to chapter 21 just to give it a whirl. The MC is a psychopath which isn't abnormal considering his history but up until that point it seems that the author had just been writing and throwing new ideas into the plot without considering other previous aspects and meshing them together into a nice flow.

This is my first review so I'll be brief. Writing quality isn't the best but it's not horrible either. Just wrong words here and there. I read up to chapter 63 in one day so I'm unsure about updates. The story isn't too slow. It can move from one day to one week and kept me interested in what was new each time. The plot itself is nice as well. It seemed like the city was portrayed with a "good" characteristic and has slowly been showing the grey areas which is nice. I kinda liked the characters and how everyone seemed to have a dark secret. There's also good character shaping and building. The world background is quite interesting as well. The author has left them self a foundation to build on for the future when it comes to the wide world. I can only hope they can create a wonderful story the is supported by the world.