Webnovel Author: GrotesqueIce

GrotesqueIce

3yr

Replied to QueenRani6

Oh my... This cheered me up. Thank you for your nice comment. I'll definitely update soon! There's just something going on right now.. Hopefully it'll be solved soon. Thank you! :)

GrotesqueIce

3yr

Replied to AnaRose

Thank you very much for your honest feedback. The edits will come soon. Thanks for taking interest with this book :)

GrotesqueIce

3yr

Replied to star_dreamer

Thank you very much for your feedback. Your support is greatly appreciated :)

GrotesqueIce

3yr

Replied to star_dreamer

Thank you very much for your feedback. I'll see to it and change it immediately :)

He feels the suffocation due to the huge amount of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere. Suddenly thrown into confusion, his mind was in a constant state of panic. His eyes were blurry as his eyes were teary due to the pain he was feeling. He saw his left hand bloodied as he touched the side of his head when he was thrown outside through the windscreen of the car due to the force of the collision. Pieces of glass shards was everywhere as he looked around in fear and agony.

Apotheosis.

Fantasy · GrotesqueIce

GrotesqueIce

3yr

Replied to Easy_Tiger

This is the first thing I read today. I am so grateful for your nice feedback. Thank you! More power to you!

Apotheosis.

Fantasy · GrotesqueIce

GrotesqueIce

3yr

Replied to Faysal_Ahmed_5058

Thank you very much for your feedback and review! [img=recommend]

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Fantasy · GrotesqueIce

GrotesqueIce

3yr

Replied to Darkjokes

Thank you very much for taking the time and reviewing my series! It means a lot to me.

Apotheosis.

Fantasy · GrotesqueIce

GrotesqueIce

3yr

Commented

My, this is so lovely.

ch 0 2 The Promise

Princess Myra: Let's fight for our Love!!

Urban · Hope_Smith_1896

GrotesqueIce

3yr

Replied to Nightsummer20

Thank you very nuch for your feedback. I appreciate it very much, dear reader. :)

Apotheosis.

Fantasy · GrotesqueIce

GrotesqueIce

3yr

Posted

Well written story, I like how the author describes what was happening. And boy, was I shocked. This story has a lot of interesting parts in it though there were a lot of terms I was unfamiliar with, I was grateful for the glossary part. Also, there were many characters, it was kind of hard for me to memorize but I hope it goes well for Mounika. Keep up the good work. I wish you the best.

Sourabha Rajyam - The Land Where Women Don't Matter

Fantasy · vinthakadha

GrotesqueIce

3yr

Replied to Nightsummer20

Yes. It has come to my attention that I need to put spaces for it not to appear text heavy for mobile users. Rest assured that I have formatted future episodes. Previous episodes will be reformatted soon. I apologize fpr the inconvenience. Thank you very much for taking an intererest to my story. I will be sure to incorporate that element in the future.

ch 0 2 Leon Czhainnehart

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Fantasy · GrotesqueIce

GrotesqueIce

3yr

Replied to Wahnzettel

Thank you very much for your honest feedback, kind reader.

Apotheosis.

Fantasy · GrotesqueIce

GrotesqueIce

3yr

Replied to The_Canary

Thank you very much for your feedback!

Apotheosis.

Fantasy · GrotesqueIce

GrotesqueIce

3yr

Replied to Nightsummer20

Thanks for this! Will edit.

She has let down her life in order to save his own son and that was what he cannot seem to comprehend. It was the purest form of love; to sacrifice oneself for the sake of the others. But for him he thought it was... stupid.

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Fantasy · GrotesqueIce

GrotesqueIce

3yr

Posted

All I can say is, Go, Kai, beat them all up! The story is both interesting and well written. I have seen little to no grammar error and I'm sure that this story has a great future. I want to know more about Kai and his further development. I look forward to more exciting episodes. Keep it up and I wish you the best.

The Forgotten Lands

Fantasy · Darkjokes

GrotesqueIce

3yr

Posted

The story is well written and my interest is piqued. It was unique of me to see a story which described all of it's characters from the get go so I have no particular like or dislike about it. The premise is nice and the story as I view it is sad and tragic (I like sad stories). From here, I look forward to where the story would go. And I think it's definitely fine if there was no romance in the story as you have said so since they are indeed siblings and a minor (unless..) Anyways, keep up the good work. I wish you all the best.

The Broken Angel & Her Overprotective Brothers

Teen · Nightsummer20

GrotesqueIce

3yr

Commented

Maybe you can change the last sentence to: "No one ever wanted a broken little child in their lives... unless they would like to break it more." So it sounds better? Just a suggestion :)

If they had known about my past they would never have brought me to their house, to their family. No one wanted a broken little child in their lives until....they want to broke them more.