Webnovel Author: Arrowinmyknee

Arrowinmyknee

9mth

Commented

Feels AI written... and at this point the fourth Shinobi World War would start. Pretty much that happened what itachi and shisui feared, just the other Clans did the Coup. no way the other villages didn't start a war.

ch 13 Aftermath

Koushin: Konoha's Dragonborn[Completed]

Anime & Comics · TheFanficGod

Arrowinmyknee

10mth

Commented

Oh come on, not the random powerful character that suddenly appears in the FF, that hasn't even any sign of existence, not even when the whole country was invaded by another in Canon.

The man smiled gently, his blue eyes twinkling with amusement. "My name is Crawford Meront, and you could say that I'm their boss."

Arrowinmyknee

10mth

Replied to Ugay123

Nah you aren't dumb. Knowledge is power. Even just listening would give him a lot information about the world he is living in.

"Oh, Jiryoku has been granted permission to attend only the taijutsu classes since he is blind. Theoretical classes are useless for him," explained the teacher.

Arrowinmyknee

10mth

Replied to Arrowinmyknee

*post death

The Chunin teacher was just about to begin searching for Jiryoku when he suddenly felt a sharp object pressing against his neck. Jiryoku had emerged out of nowhere and was now standing behind the stunned Chunin teacher, holding his sword against Chunins neck. The Chunin teacher was astonished at Jiryoku's speed and prowess, realizing that his initial assumptions about Jiryoku's abilities were entirely unfounded.

Naruto: Blind Hyuga

Anime & Comics · Hkj

Arrowinmyknee

10mth

Replied to Ryuu23

that's not True. The Naruto universe has Planetary level threads Kaguya, Madara, Obito, Natuto, Sasuke and so on theoretical there could be even cosmic level threads with Hagoromo ppost earth and Shiba Otsuki, while the highest in one piece is Multi Continental Continental with Whitebeard.

The Chunin teacher was just about to begin searching for Jiryoku when he suddenly felt a sharp object pressing against his neck. Jiryoku had emerged out of nowhere and was now standing behind the stunned Chunin teacher, holding his sword against Chunins neck. The Chunin teacher was astonished at Jiryoku's speed and prowess, realizing that his initial assumptions about Jiryoku's abilities were entirely unfounded.

Naruto: Blind Hyuga

Anime & Comics · Hkj

Arrowinmyknee

10mth

Commented

doesn't feel cliche at all. It would have been a cliche if the MC was Jon Snow or something. But you wrote a compelling Dragon MC, and choose a pairing you thought fit. Though I am a bit disappointed that it isn't another dragon. In the end it's your story and you should write what you feel is right.

AN: After some consideration and how I plan on writing this story, I decided that Daenerys Targaryen is going to be the female lead. Yes, I know that is 'cliche' and 'overused' but this is how I want the story to go. I figured I give you all the warning as some will stop reading after finding out this is my choice. Which I respect that choice, I mean I write because I enjoy it and no one is paying me to, so read or don't read either way I will be writing.

A True Dragon in GOT

TV · Anomander_Adaar

Arrowinmyknee

10mth

Commented

And this is where I am out in this story. If the Author doesn't even know the difference between a basic Clone and a Shadow Clone, it just means that he is too lazy to do proper research.

ch 0 6 Arrogant Clone(Edited)

Naruto: Reincarnated Zeus

Anime & Comics · Zerga3

Arrowinmyknee

10mth

Posted

Damn this became boring and stretched out. And I write that around chapter 600 there are still over 800 to go from the Original. The Villains have the Plot Armor and get buffed beyond reason. Nagato has for example unlocked Limbo on the same level as Madara fucking Uchiha in the original after he became the Jinchuuriki of the Juubi, and no Nagato is not a Jinchuuriki he just got the Plot device Hashirama Cells boosting him beyond reason.

Reborn into Naruto World with Tenseigan

Anime & Comics · Alex_Clive

Arrowinmyknee

10mth

Replied to LuciusAgares

I hope he falls for Kushina and follows her to Uzugakure instead.

ch 27 Ch-27 Invitation to the Chunin Exams

Uzumaki Fire God

Anime & Comics · Hkj

Arrowinmyknee

10mth

Commented

isn't this right after the Kyubi attack, that means Asuma is like 15-16 and didn't even leave yet for the Guardian Ninjas. That happens 7 years before the series, so in around 5 years.

"Haa.. I need to get multiple of these." Asuma had already made up his mind. He had quite the money saved with himself during his time being the Guardian Ninja of Fire nation and he wouldn't mind breaking the vault for these cute little ones.

The Shopkeeper of Konoha

Anime & Comics · thelightedghost

Arrowinmyknee

11mth

Posted

A good start. Please more. I want to see how it goes on.

[HP X DXD] Master of a Universe

Book&Literature · Ashmodai

Arrowinmyknee

11mth

Posted

World: MHA, Wish: Nanomachines, Quirk he was born with: Telekinesis. Suddenly he pulls qi cultivation, Mental Energy, Telepathy, Pyrokinesis, Blablakinesis, and so on out if his ass. This makes no fucking sense and makes the story just a senseless mess of powers without a real explanation. Martial Arts is basically Cultivation is not an explanation. I predict this story won't go far be it popularity or the Author himself, he will have trouble to keep track of what his MC can do since it doesn't make any sense. Writing Quality: 3/5 Readable with Mistakes Story Development: 1/5 Have all Powers now Canon starts isn't a Story. Character Design: 1/5 The MC is plain hasn't much depth, keeps distance from others, Powers are the only thing he has. We don't really know what he even wants. Update Stability: 3/5 Fresh story but doesn't give confidence of going anywhere. World Background: 1/5 For it being a MHA fiction not much to do with Quirks or Heros besides the MC randomly proclaiming he wants to be a Hero without a reason, or suddenly also needing a Villain Identity. More a cultivation Story with random powers.

Nano in MHA

Anime & Comics · ChillPixel369

Arrowinmyknee

11mth

Posted

Story makes no sense. There is no Aburame without bugs, they receive the nests at birth, it's not really their choice, before they even could make decisions they don't know anything else. Even if the Setting was possible, why would you write an Story with an Aburame as MC if you don't want them to have their insects...

Naruto: A Broken Dream

Anime & Comics · DesMark

Arrowinmyknee

11mth

Posted

80 chapter long filler/training arc. Interesting idea but slow and boring to read. You can skip easily 5 chapters without having missed anything. Timeline of the story makes no sense it's off by around 10 years (281 was Roberts Rebellion in Canon and Robb and Jon birth, here they are 7-8 years old.) I believe so no idea how far away from the story beginning we are at least 4 years which took already 80 chapters training/filler. Not really a good read, no idea why there only are 5 star review.

A Druid In Game Of Thrones

TV · KuroWashi1903

Arrowinmyknee

11mth

Replied to Arrowinmyknee

oh yeah and lots of cliff hangers and time wasting chapters without any real progress.

Gol D. Ace In Coiling Dragon

Anime & Comics · DreamTales

Arrowinmyknee

11mth

Posted

Setting was good, that's the only good thing about the story. Turned quite quickly to shit. Grammar is okay. There is the typical Fanfic stereotypes of talentless Authors to turn the Main cast of the Original into Assholes. Ace has no Affinity whatsoever even after more than 70 chapters for some shit plot idea of the Author. Plot Armor in Form of some unheard superpowerful Academy suddely appearing taking Ace in. Just a bad and frustrating story.

Gol D. Ace In Coiling Dragon

Anime & Comics · DreamTales

Arrowinmyknee

11mth

Posted

Pedophile Story. . .

Harry Potter system in Douluo Dalu

Anime & Comics · Daddy_strikes_

Arrowinmyknee

11mth

Commented

Neither fits the World Background...

(* from now on, name Hansen will be used to fit the world background.)

Harry Potter system in Douluo Dalu

Anime & Comics · Daddy_strikes_

Arrowinmyknee

11mth

Replied to Anonny_Anonymous

If that was true why do people only receive their Hogwarts Letter for each year during the Summer Holidays and not on their birthday? How do they know which books needs to be on the letter if the defense teacher changes every year and chooses their own book and is only decided on during the Summer Holidays. (see Lockhart who put all his books on the list or Umbridge who chooses useless ones without magic). You know that you have a thing called brain, try using it. It's simple Logic.

ch 0 9 Chapter 9 "Basic Magic Theory"

Marvel's Hogwarts Wizard

Anime & Comics · Poka_Poka

Arrowinmyknee

11mth

Commented

witch... a magician does card tricks.

The girl proudly raised her chin, "No doubt. I had a lot of questions for Professor McGonagall when she visited my house yesterday, and I now plan to memorize all of the texts before classes begin. I'll undoubtedly be the magician with the finest grades by then!"

Marvel's Hogwarts Wizard

Anime & Comics · Poka_Poka

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Koushin: Konoha's Dragonborn[Completed]

Fairy Tail: Shinigami

Naruto: Blind Hyuga

Naruto: Blind Hyuga

Naruto: Blind Hyuga

A True Dragon in GOT

Naruto: Reincarnated Zeus

Reborn into Naruto World with Tenseigan

Uzumaki Fire God

The Shopkeeper of Konoha

[HP X DXD] Master of a Universe

Nano in MHA

Naruto: A Broken Dream

A Druid In Game Of Thrones

Gol D. Ace In Coiling Dragon

Gol D. Ace In Coiling Dragon

Harry Potter system in Douluo Dalu

Harry Potter system in Douluo Dalu

Marvel's Hogwarts Wizard

Marvel's Hogwarts Wizard

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