Webnovel Author: VRW1 - Novel Collection

VRW1

9mth

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The chapter was a good pace, and give a good picture of the story while I was reading.

ch 0 1 First Day

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Fantasy · IvanelaFics

VRW1

9mth

Replied to HandsomeWriter

Thanks for the review. I self edit all my stuff and also it help me improve as a writer but I do reread my stuff and see the errors. I do come back and change it later on. Keep reading it. It does gets better along the way.

39 Myths

Sci-fi · VRW1

VRW1

9mth

Commented

Lets do it.

Let's get to it, shall we?

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Fantasy · IvanelaFics

VRW1

1yr

Commented

I said west twice but the last part is the east.

ch 0 2 The New World

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Action · VRW1

VRW1

1yr

Replied to RomanceFanatic028

The MC have a split personality so that why it was confusing. I going to explain later on. Thanks for the review.

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Action · VRW1

VRW1

1yr

Posted

The story have potential and how the set goal of which each character is going to have to overcome in the story and how the author did that in the story, but there is grammar errors, but every story have grammar errors. It give the author more room to improve and involve the creation of your storytelling. Keep it up author

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Fantasy · RomanceFanatic028

VRW1

1yr

Commented

Some words need to be capitalize. The story is great, but that old man is up something. Nice touch putting in shaman. A MC that is inbetween her sister and mother. The grandmother is more mysterious. The story gave potentials but grammar need to be corrected.

ch 0 2 Shaman Of The West Village

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Fantasy · RomanceFanatic028

VRW1

1yr

Commented

That knife and pepper spray going to be useless.

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Fantasy · RomanceFanatic028

VRW1

1yr

Commented

Don’t follow.🤦🏽

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Fantasy · RomanceFanatic028

VRW1

1yr

Commented

I don’t know what culture shaman come from but it can be build a lot of storytelling.

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Fantasy · RomanceFanatic028

VRW1

1yr

Commented

This old man up something.

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Fantasy · RomanceFanatic028

VRW1

1yr

Commented

That guy going to come up later.

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Fantasy · RomanceFanatic028

VRW1

1yr

Replied to ThePotatoKing

Okay. I skip some years due to his spilt personality. He created of the events he suffer. I will explain that later on, but that why it is confusing.

ch 0 1 The Boy

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Action · VRW1

VRW1

1yr

Replied to ThePotatoKing

I fix the grammar errors later and Soul games can also be confusing so I try to make it mystery. Also thank you for the review

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Action · VRW1

VRW1

1yr

Posted

The story at first was peaceful and felt with emotion and at first, he had me when he wrote it at first, but after reading it further it will hit with a punch and you will ask yourself what is going on in a good way.

Masquerade of Madness

Horror · ThePotatoKing

VRW1

1yr

Commented

I see the hint of it being all within his head, but it was surprising that he was eating the cake by himself. It feels cool when you eat alone though. Good start.

ch 0 2 "Happy Birthday ... to me!"

Masquerade of Madness

Horror · ThePotatoKing

VRW1

1yr

Commented

From a dream to a nightmare.

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Masquerade of Madness

Horror · ThePotatoKing

VRW1

1yr

Commented

Telling the object is like the person is a good comparison when it comes to personalities and describing the behavior of people.

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Horror · ThePotatoKing

VRW1

1yr

Replied to Loctovia

Thanks. I will correct the grammar errors later on. Then come back through and tell me what you think then.

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Action · VRW1

VRW1

1yr

Posted

The story is well deserve the design of the story and the plot so far in the prologue leave to the imagination of the MC. I like the way the author deliver the mystery and dark tone of the mother.

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Fantasy · Loctovia

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