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Fenly_Arismaya

1yr

Posted

Hi! It's me Fenly Kim! Hey you did a good beginning, babe. But better than you put the title in chapter with a interesting title, not only chapter one. But overall it's good! Keep going!

Back to you Alec!

Urban · NinaY

Fenly_Arismaya

1yr

Posted

Humhumhum I'm coming!! Hm, this is romance book, right? I think that's story tell about love triangle, so ... it must be excited! And also your sentences and description is pretty good, actually good, but that's little bit much I guess. But overall its exellent! Keep going!

Now You Look at Me

Fantasy · Hikma_2011

Fenly_Arismaya

1yr

Replied to Fenly_Arismaya

But overall, that's plot is very good. You did a good sentences. So keep going!!!

Between the sun and the cloud

Fantasy · Reemah_Reigns

Fenly_Arismaya

1yr

Posted

Hi this is fenly kim! okay I arrived here and here my review! hehe I already read the blurb, then I was imagine how cute they meet the dragon. Haha. And I very excited when they survive from the villain, that's make me heat beat for waiting next chapter!

Between the sun and the cloud

Fantasy · Reemah_Reigns

Fenly_Arismaya

1yr

Replied to Fenly_Arismaya

*typo is everywhere : story

Arya: A Life, A Quest

Teen · NinaY

Fenly_Arismaya

1yr

Posted

This is Kimmy Yamashira. I came to review ur book [img=recommend] Hey, that's book is soooo good. Very intense and myterious. So curious atmosphere in the storu, and actually I love your pretty idea. o keep going!

Arya: A Life, A Quest

Teen · NinaY

Fenly_Arismaya

1yr

Replied to Xue_Yang_1476

Tapi ... Ternyata ada juga lekuk lain yang tidak cocok, seperti bukan pola yang sesuai. Apa maksudnya?

Crystal Pair

Fantasy · Fenly_Arismaya

Fenly_Arismaya

1yr

Replied to Xue_Yang_1476

Lagipula, itu di daerah yg saljunya lebat banget kak. Biasanya tingginya ampe bermeter2, jadi mobil gak bisa masuk. Harus ada mobil pemecah es yg lewat. Klo pake kereta kuda, atau kadang rusa bertanduk, itu bisa dipecah. Karena mereka kuat

Beberapa menit persiapan telah usai, mereka pun bertemu di titik kumpul. Membawa serta kuda-kuda juga. Meletakkan barang-barang perlengkapan mereka di kereta yang ditarik oleh para kuda itu.

Crystal Pair

Fantasy · Fenly_Arismaya

Fenly_Arismaya

1yr

Replied to

oh, ini karena di daerah salju kak. Kereta salju itu masih dipake biasanya, karena lebih strong. Ada beberapa hewan yg bisa memecah es

Beberapa menit persiapan telah usai, mereka pun bertemu di titik kumpul. Membawa serta kuda-kuda juga. Meletakkan barang-barang perlengkapan mereka di kereta yang ditarik oleh para kuda itu.

Crystal Pair

Fantasy · Fenly_Arismaya

Fenly_Arismaya

1yr

Posted

This is Kimmy Yamashira. I told you, I've already read your blurb and chapter one. For the beginning, I think its sooo beautiful words and sentences. This setting place that can make the readers feeling the story for more. I can imagine the characters pain, that's awesome. You did a good job! Keep going! [img=recommend]

The Luna's Sinful Lover

Fantasy · Alancaster

Fenly_Arismaya

1yr

Replied to Noella_Quin

oh yes, thank you. I'll edit that 🙏🥰

Crystal Pair (English Version)

Fantasy · Fenly_Arismaya

Fenly_Arismaya

1yr

Posted

Kimmy Yamashira here! For the first review, I saw the cover is so pretty. It's describe your contents of you book, that's good. Then, I feel sorry because there's no blurb here. Maybe you can put blurb for introduce your story. Sometimes, a readers like to follow a story with a good and exciting opening from the blurb. Hehe. But overall, that's really awesome story! Keep going!

Running to the Throne

Fantasy · Noella_Quin

Fenly_Arismaya

1yr

Replied to Monarch_novel

Thanks [img=recommend]

Crystal Pair (English Version)

Fantasy · Fenly_Arismaya

Fenly_Arismaya

1yr

Posted

Kimmy Yamashira here! I already read a blurb and chapter one. Lemme say you did a good sentences. Very pretty structure. The plot and oping is so good, very mysterious, so I can feel the atmosphere. You did a good jon and I want more chapters soon! Keep going! [img=recommend]

A Lord's Indifference

Fantasy · Monarch_novel

Fenly_Arismaya

1yr

Replied to Wyn_stelle

For sure, if I get contract soon wkwk

Crystal Pair

Fantasy · Fenly_Arismaya

Fenly_Arismaya

1yr

Posted

Kimmy Yamashira here! I reviewed as Fenly_Arismaya, is that okay? Fine, here my review. First when I read blurb, I love that detail physic of character. But I need more chapter, so you keep going ur chapter 😬

White Royal Queen

Fantasy · Wyn_stelle

Fenly_Arismaya

1yr

Replied to Zqueen_Psy60

Kenapa? Anda kecewa kalau saya perempuan, ya? Wkwkwk. Banyak yang zonk dan banyak yang godain lho pas aku jadi cowok wkwkwk pen ngakak rasanya

Crystal Pair

Fantasy · Fenly_Arismaya

Fenly_Arismaya

1yr

Replied to Fenly_Arismaya

Darkness in Romance

Urban · Zqueen_Psy60

Fenly_Arismaya

1yr

Replied to Zqueen_Psy60

yes thanksss [img=recommend]

Crystal Pair (English Version)

Fantasy · Fenly_Arismaya

Fenly_Arismaya

1yr

Replied to Zqueen_Psy60

yes [img=recommend] Ssstt tapi aq nyamar jadi org luar. Jadi cowok pula 🤣 Actually I'm girl

Crystal Pair

Fantasy · Fenly_Arismaya

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