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(read in a calm tone) I don't want to be negative but it kinda feels like every other characters but Draco and Eva are experiencing character development but Draco and Eva seam to regressing they now seem so one dimensional Draco and co seems weak as fuck others receiving Divine class up's are all basically OP and Draco is now only starting to train in his sword technique The Story is great and all but it kinda feels Draco went from Godlike to Hero in training I read this story for the shameless trio but now they have almost no real screen time every few chapters it's the god serpent's or other guild members and it's been a while since you showed what's happening with Draco and Eva IRL I truly don't care for others you haven't shown the lineage's in RL and In earlier floors kinda wanted to make it seem Draco's parents gave a shit like in every other story parents abandoned you and they're always forgiven after saying shit like they didn't have a choice or weren't strong enough like they even actually try and be better (I don't even have parent problem's but why do these guys so easily forgive people don't work like that it just doesn't make sense during those levels it seems Draco wants to forgive them kinda sucks) even those lineage brats get special treatment in the beginning Draco was rage full now he's so goofy (multiple personalities) it still doesn't make sense how the fuck is goofy so in control over others Still love the novel but Draco and Eva is so one dimensional now kinda disappointing hope you won't make Draco just see his parents feel emotional forgive them and all's good his lineage tried to basically kill him cause they were scared of the Pangu lineage were against him existing I know there's a difference between banished and killing but here it's basically the same and come the fuck on he's their ancestor And god basically and they banished him sealed his bloodline that should be sin enough to kill them all