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d_elfe

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I live to write and share. Fanfictions on webnovel, and original works under pseudonyme d'elfe as a contractor. I am also a published author in France, http://www.delfyne-gwenn.fr/index.php/fr/

2020-12-03 Joined France

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Replied to unosknight7274
She is moderately skilled because she ended up fighting twice as a gladiator. But it's still not enough to master a sword, and the gladius is using very different techniques as well.

Well, OK, sleeping seemed good right now. If she had not been in full alert because of the possibility to be ambushed again by the freaky ghosts, Frances would have collapsed to the ground and slept twenty-four hours in a row. The young woman was dead on her feet, her body not used to skipping a whole night and walking ten hours with close to no sustenance. She made a mental note to keep in better shape in the future, or upgrade her training with the FBI to keep up with the requirements of time travel and medieval roads. If she had not been hiking around in the mountains so much as a kid, and always walking in cities rather than using a car, the young woman would have collapsed halfway. Remembering how people made fun of her, telling her that she should have been born in another century with her stupid refusal of using too many machines, Frances realised that her little habits might have saved her for once.

Frances

Frances

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Replied to unosknight7274
Good catch ! My scenario had changed so much that I forgot to remove this one. The fact is that she didn't :) Thank you for pointing it out. Hopefully, the rest has been smoothed out properly.

Her first elvish word was Estel, it was the name of Elrond foster son from what the twins had told her. She had a few doubts about who this might be, and a good part of her really wanted Strider to be the one. Perhaps she was mistaken, but for sure there was something more than a man in the ranger, the depth of is grey eyes told her so. AND, he was the only human in Rivendell. A good candidate then. For the moment, she had realised that if elves did not bear their age through skin or posture, their eyes betrayed it all. Frances was slowly coming to terms with the idea of living a thousand years old, but still she got issues with that thought. However, in Strider's eyes there was some wisdom rarely seen on other men his age, and that intrigued her. Even Maximus, who had suffered a great deal, or the Jedi had not given her this weird impression.

Frances

Frances

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Replied to unosknight7274
Typical Mulder naïveté here... he's insufferable, right ?

— "You cannot prevent us from talking. The people deserve to know what is happening there!"

Frances

Frances

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I didn't understand what you meant here, I admit.

Well, OK, sleeping seemed good right now. If she had not been in full alert because of the possibility to be ambushed again by the freaky ghosts, Frances would have collapsed to the ground and slept twenty-four hours in a row. The young woman was dead on her feet, her body not used to skipping a whole night and walking ten hours with close to no sustenance. She made a mental note to keep in better shape in the future, or upgrade her training with the FBI to keep up with the requirements of time travel and medieval roads. If she had not been hiking around in the mountains so much as a kid, and always walking in cities rather than using a car, the young woman would have collapsed halfway. Remembering how people made fun of her, telling her that she should have been born in another century with her stupid refusal of using too many machines, Frances realised that her little habits might have saved her for once.

Frances

Frances

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Replied to unosknight7274
Yes, she definitely needs it
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Replied to Tiger_Eyes
maaaaaaaybe ?

— "Ugh, no! I don't want to ever hear about driving a car again. It's done, I'm relieved."

Toeing the line

Toeing the line

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Replied to Li_Yi_Wei
OK. I get what you say. That novels are not the same quality as published work on webnovel. You should probably know that the author requested pointers on the forum, and that's why I spent time giving her professional advice in the first place. Hence my remark on the 'show don't tell'.
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LOVE ME HARDER, MR. FU

LOVE ME HARDER, MR. FU

Urban · Xia_Xia89

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Replied to Li_Yi_Wei
So you mean to tell we that the 'Show don't tell' principle is an occidental principle and that Asian cultures prefer the 'tell don't show ?'. I'm genuinely curious. And genuinely surprised as well. I'd be curious to read a published Asian author, but unfortunately I'd have to read it translated :'(
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LOVE ME HARDER, MR. FU

LOVE ME HARDER, MR. FU

Urban · Xia_Xia89

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Replied to NotBeatrix
Thank the Gods men evolved in the meantime ! :D
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LOVE ME HARDER, MR. FU

LOVE ME HARDER, MR. FU

Urban · Xia_Xia89

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You definitely should. Bergen is THE place to see. I think I depicted it in 'Stage Fright', chapter 9 - freedom, mostly. https://www.webnovel.com/book/stage-fright_19074257706310705 I lived here for a few years and damn, it was beautiful !
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LOVE ME HARDER, MR. FU

LOVE ME HARDER, MR. FU

Urban · Xia_Xia89

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Replied to NotBeatrix
Yes, I could feel that, and am left wondering. Good job in your part !
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LOVE ME HARDER, MR. FU

LOVE ME HARDER, MR. FU

Urban · Xia_Xia89

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Replied to Li_Yi_Wei
Informal writing it very different from exposure issues. Perhaps this is how you write and you like it that way.
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LOVE ME HARDER, MR. FU

LOVE ME HARDER, MR. FU

Urban · Xia_Xia89

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Replied to Li_Yi_Wei
That's a notion unheard of in Europe. So I point it out to let her/him know. So, in general, I get that you don't agree with me. I comment to help, because I'm a published author. I've been through the process, and learnt from my editor. I'm sorry if you feel offended by my tips, but I don't see the point of you commenting on another one's post. If the author wants to get back to me, I'm all right with it. If you are going to counterattack every single one of my suggestions, I'm not so sure it's going to help anybody.
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LOVE ME HARDER, MR. FU

LOVE ME HARDER, MR. FU

Urban · Xia_Xia89

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Replied to Li_Yi_Wei
You get me wrong. It's not that it's irrelevant, it's the manner of exposure. The show don't tell principle that you will find detailed on the net.
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LOVE ME HARDER, MR. FU

LOVE ME HARDER, MR. FU

Urban · Xia_Xia89

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Replied to NotBeatrix
From the picts mostly.
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Tristan and Isolde

Tristan and Isolde

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Replied to NotBeatrix
Well, if you go on reading to the end you'll find that info but it's always interesting to know that Sarmatian tribes literally revered their women. All those populations that lived in very harsh conditions knew the importance of half their population. Some mothers were warriors, and buried in their grave with their weapons. Others were shamans, or healers. And mostly, they had strength of character. There are traditions where women were the ones who chose their husbands, not the other way around. It's very very different from the way Romans treated their women. They had literally no rights. So, all the better for Isolde !

Jumping down his mare, Tristan unsheathed his sword with a purposeful move, all aches forgotten. Rage flew through his veins; the scout was no stranger to violence. He relished in extinguishing life efficiently, drank in the thrill of battle like nectar, washing his blade in the blood of his enemies. Men or women made no difference; any warrior that measured up to him met his end by his blade. But there was no duplicity in his heart. Despite rumours, Tristan wasn't cruel, nor sadistic. He killed, as quickly and efficiently as possible, whomever accepted to attack him. A warrior's honour, in which the assailant bowed to the skill of his opponent. May the best win.

Tristan and Isolde

Tristan and Isolde

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Replied to NotBeatrix
Ok. Tristan is, he saved her son's life. I'll look into it. Thanks

— "The seamstress will have you, she owes me. Better you change your name, though"

Tristan and Isolde

Tristan and Isolde

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