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is not at

**One but powerful. Estimated age is at 3**

Haklaran Hunter

Haklaran Hunter

Fantasy · Saviour_Ibok_4011

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I love the "place to love the unloved" part.

They were mirrors to a world that only celestial beings transcended through; a place to love the unloved. Past the beating of hearts and into the Garden of Eden.

The History of the Human Heart

The History of the Human Heart

Fantasy · PrugnaKerai

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Use smth else instead of perk, it doesn't go well with the scenario you're creating

Her ears perked up at the slow approaching footsteps. Turning around, a gasp escaped her lips when she saw a shadow before her. Those pair of black eyes staring into her soul making her fret. Panicking, She grabbed onto the handle as she turned around and entered the room, closing the door behind her shut. Her breathing stopped when her eyes fell on the room.

Into Your Blood And Bones

Into Your Blood And Bones

Fantasy · _Rain

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It would sound better if you say her footsteps echoed in the darkness

In the darkness, her footsteps echoed as she desperately searched a way out of this hell. Skyla cried silently as she ran aimlessly in the darkness. Her feet stopped when she faced a black door, making her gulp in fear.

Into Your Blood And Bones

Into Your Blood And Bones

Fantasy · _Rain

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Break down the sentence, it is a runoff.
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Removing has would be better
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Ahaha love that

Alex, by that logic, was therefore cheap and empty junk.

How-not to be an Olympian God!

How-not to be an Olympian God!

Fantasy · Venusean

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I am confused. Is he already into corporate lifestyle or not?
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✨The story of my life ✨

To be good at everything, yet great at nothing, that was the fate Alex had 'endured' all his life

How-not to be an Olympian God!

How-not to be an Olympian God!

Fantasy · Venusean

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The Vivian and Allery part is confusing. I would suggest clearing this scene out more.
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Devil Child

Devil Child

LGBT+ · SEP1A

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lied down on her bed and buried
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take the comma off
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