LeoAsimp_co

3yr

Commented

Dominik's athletic body, perfect in proportions, arched. His handsome face was on fire, making it impossible to take your eyes off her. Andrzej felt his mouth dry and his pants throbbing. Even though the whole scene was seriously indecent, there was something incredibly appealing about it. Something pleasantly erotic.

Love Lives in His Eyes [BL]

LGBT+ · AmberFullMoon

LeoAsimp_co

3yr

Replied to Aeipathy_02

Thank you, iT is a lot of work being an authour, doing the acurate research.. And etc, But we managed to do it lol

Empty bro

LGBT+ · LeoAsimp_co

LeoAsimp_co

3yr

Replied to phoenixhyperion

Aww ty, heaeimg that means a lot to us. Thank you for your review. We try to make The emotions of our charcters realistic and their backstory and their faults and etc. Its really nice when our readers understand them and what their going through.

Empty bro

LGBT+ · LeoAsimp_co

LeoAsimp_co

3yr

Replied to aigaakabane14

Yes, ThOse are very valid and helpful points. We arent pros but we continue to learn and get better. Thank you for your review we appreicate it.

Empty bro

LGBT+ · LeoAsimp_co

LeoAsimp_co

3yr

Replied to mozza_mello

Aww thank you that review was really refreshing...and yes WEre aware of thet and at this point werent not surprised but once This novel is fiNished well go back and make it more polished. Probably more in the later chapters than the newer Ones that will be posted soon BUt again thank you.

Empty bro

LGBT+ · LeoAsimp_co

LeoAsimp_co

3yr

Replied to Aeipathy_02

At thIs point errors arent a surprise to us lol... but when we weire we try to pit ourselves iNto their shoes therfore making the emotions Real. But thank you for Your review

Empty bro

LGBT+ · LeoAsimp_co

LeoAsimp_co

3yr

Replied to JustLikeWriting777

Aw- ty that really makes my day

Empty bro

LGBT+ · LeoAsimp_co

LeoAsimp_co

3yr

Replied to mozza_mello

Mhmmm T-T

"Ro, you ok?" She speaks softly, it calms my heart. I grab her hand and nod.

Empty bro

LGBT+ · LeoAsimp_co

LeoAsimp_co

3yr

Replied to mozza_mello

Heheeeee

" Mǔgǒu [bitch] " I huff and sit down.

Empty bro

LGBT+ · LeoAsimp_co

LeoAsimp_co

3yr

Replied to mozza_mello

Its fine, very understandable

I start to feel light headed and nauseated but I try my best to hold it. I start to tear up as I view myself in the mirror. I looked sick, my hair was starting to turn white. I clear my thoughts and take off my clothes.

Empty bro

LGBT+ · LeoAsimp_co

LeoAsimp_co

3yr

Replied to Anxious_thangz

I-

Opening the medicine cabinet I grab a few bottles of my medicine and pop a few pills in. I cup my hand under the faucet and drink the water to wash it down. It didn't taste good.

Empty bro

LGBT+ · LeoAsimp_co

LeoAsimp_co

3yr

Replied to mozza_mello

Its a Very sweet interaction between the tWo

She rushes in and slams the door shut her giggles sounding muffled from behind the closed door. "damn it" Matt grunts and softly kicks the door.

Empty bro

LGBT+ · LeoAsimp_co

LeoAsimp_co

3yr

Commented

WhAaaattt dimitri broo...

"Oh no." Dmitri looked up with his broken shield.

Earth's Doom Starts with... Me?

Fantasy · mozza_mello

LeoAsimp_co

3yr

Commented

Oh d-damn....

"Young miss, let me reiterate it for you. If you don't answer my questions in 5 seconds, or if your answer is unsatisfying to me, you'll die." The woman suddenly drew her sword.

Earth's Doom Starts with... Me?

Fantasy · mozza_mello

LeoAsimp_co

3yr

Posted

Ive Only read the first chapter and im already stunned... This...this is the type of book i needed and its going to staY in my library. Honestly you write so flawlessy Its amazing keep.it.up Kudos to you!

The Shadow I live With

Horror · JustLikeWriting777

LeoAsimp_co

3yr

Commented

I- ...You can walk jUst fIne sir

"Quite an old place." He says to himself. "No elevator either huh?"

The Shadow I live With

Horror · JustLikeWriting777

LeoAsimp_co

3yr

Commented

Right, You cant just walk in and ask fir a key....smh

"You need to check in first." I say, walking to the counter, placing the rose inside the drawer and taking out a register.

The Shadow I live With

Horror · JustLikeWriting777

LeoAsimp_co

3yr

Posted

This book iS really interesting, i can see thst it has potential and originality. Those are good things to have in a book, the mc seems really intrestimg and love how you explain how strings work in their world it Really brings the book together. Keep it up you’re doing great. [img=update]