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i_did_this1st

i_did_this1st

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Let's start by saying that I love writing and reading equal and I'm looking to improve on my writing and looking for anyone who would read my book and give me good advice on how to be better.

2020-12-12 Joined Global

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I might have shot him... not by mistake... then regret
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im just going to say that I think the person after her is her father who else thinks that

He is here!!! He found me!! I don't wanna go back to him!!! God please don't do this to me!!! Pleaaasssee!!!!

Veiled Truth

Veiled Truth

Eastern · TanY

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I felt this because she you said 'but sometimes this nature die when your in pain ..' and that's so true

Its in all of us that no matter how we are, where we are, we always want to live another day, another minute. Whether it’s for saying goodbye to a loved one, or taking last breath thinking that you are going to leave this World. The thought of death fears us, the thought of what comes next, the thought of leaving your loved ones, the thought of closing your eyes and never seeing anything but only darkness. But this nature sometimes dies when you are in pain, you have no reason to live, no one to see or smile to, no one to live for. When life gives you immense pain, the thought of living vanishes from your life. You forget to thank and start complaining, you forget that your life is beautiful.

Repent

Repent

Fantasy · Maryam Shairani

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I'm just going to be honest here. This book needs alot of editing and proofreading. Work on your sentence structure and grammar and you'll have a great book working with because you have an amazing story line and the characters are very good. To anyone reading my review don't be discouraged by the sentence structure or grammar because it's a great story to read.
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that's just not nice how would you feel after being bullied by your crush and embarrassed... no no I think she doesn't need any of those jerks in her life. period.
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