Divine_univers - Profile

i dont typically leave a review till 20 chapters minimum

I'll just be brutally honest from what I've read. 1. this book suffers from a lack of consistency, it feels like I'm jumping around from event to event instead of having any form of flow.2. so we have the backstory of the character and how his family is killed by aristocrats, and the plot twist with him actually having a whole nother side to his family that he refuses to connect to. 3, the MC is childish and lacks any sense of maturity,4. the battles themselves are just so hard to picture, author does a good job with the emotions the mc feels in certain portions but it just doesn't translate into the actual scenes that I'm trying to picture into my head very well.5 I really don't know how big this world is, how they get from point A to point B(specifically talking about locations.) 6. book has twists and turns which are usually good to try and keep you interested, but the last battle where MC gets taken away makes no sense, so they thought he was dead so his master/friends left him there in the banquet hall which the then emperor takes him away to try and brainwash him through torcher, which by the way we still haven't got a update on.7. When I read a story I don't mind having multiple perspectives but when you make each perspective their own miniature mcs its a big turn off. feel like the pace of this story should've been slow down a lot more cause that goes hand in hand with these other perspectives feeling to jumpy and just out of left field same with the plot twists. didn't mind reading it was just very confused in the processing of what the author is going for and i hope they take this criticism with care. considering i do want it to succeed otherwise I wouldn't have wrote my longest review and or gripe if you want to see it that way ever

I've really enjoyed this so far, for once I'm not overwhelmed with mass dumps of info and feel like a story is well paced, plot and character development have been quite good as well so far and I look forward to the future of this WN