Webnovel Author: VishalGupta - Novel Collection

Thanks for your advice. Will try to incorporate as many suggestions as I can, but it is not possible to revamp all chapters. Every reader has a different POV and genre they like. This was based on a previous work and the Main Character is supposed to do exact opposite of what he did in his second life. As far as showing vs telling, he does that pretty often. When he took people to Dragon Island of a different world or killed and resurrected someone or when he teleported people. He is not lying to everyone close to him. He did meet them in previous life and he is just speeding up the process. He is THE GOD of this Greater world, and he can do whatever he wants. The Main character did not live for a long time. He died in his early thirties on Earth, where he had no superpowers, since they did not exist. In his second life, he cultivated with the help of the system and had a fight with the Emperor of Immortals when he was just 29 years old. He wasn't a 1000 year old monk. Please remember that this is just the initial phase of the story. He needs to gather people as quickly as possible, since he has bigger fish to fry from other worlds. Again, thank you very much for your suggestions and happy reading!

pretty much.