Jai_vardhan

2yr

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wow.. i have never thought that a new writer could write this well. the story is well planned and developing at a good pace. i like the dialogues and the way it brings the bubbliness out. good work author,. i am your fan now.

Jai_vardhan

2yr

Posted

The story is about three husband who would take revenge of their wives getting bullied and so as them.. i must say that both the title and story is very interesting. the writing quality has improved which i did not know was possible since the writer has already done wonder in her other novels. the story was well written developing with a proper pace, not so fast but not too slow. the characters were well developed with realistic flaws, and not so picture perfect as a few novels show making them pure fiction. though the world background could be improved, over all the story is worth all the coins my account have. good job author

Jai_vardhan

2yr

Posted

good story, intersting characters, i got hooked from the start. looking forward for further updates. i will request for another mass relase author

Jai_vardhan

2yr

Commented

never knew marriage is a thing to flaunt and so as kids

Reunion of herds. They got married, have kids, flaunting this and that. Victoria sighed. " I hate it," Victoria said. "Same here." Stacey lifted her glass of water like she's cheering for it.

Jai_vardhan

2yr

Commented

ig thats a lot just bcz she is fat!

Victoria, in her senior year, participated in dancing. She made sure that she got it perfectly. It's a championship and she wanted to lose weight. She was losing weight. But as she looked at herself in the mirror, she knew that she wasn't good enough. She looked at those girls who get lots of flowers and chocolates during Valentine's, or on their birthday, or Christmas. But no one ever gave her such a thing, well, except for her best friend as they exchange gifts and all.

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Jai_vardhan

2yr

Commented

hobby, writing

All night, Victoria couldn't sleep as she thought about her insecurities. Of not being beautiful. She didn't get a suitor and she is always left out. She didn't have anyone until another loner like her came up. Her best friend Stacey stayed with her through her ups and downs. She's the only friend that stays. They get along, enjoy being together until she finds her hobby. Writing. She wasn't good but as she read and listened to their English teacher on how to make it easy and the stages of writing, she knew that she could do it.

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Jai_vardhan

2yr

Commented

jst bcz she is fat, lol?

Being a big disappointment isn't easy to live her life in high school. She got backstabbed by friends and everyone looked at her with those piercing and full of mockery gaze. Girls would turn at each other and whisper.

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Jai_vardhan

2yr

Commented

expensive treatment for being slim?

Let's start with her background. Lady Jaya Victoria Parson of the Parson Royal Family loves art, writing, reading and she loves nature and being alone most of the time. She had enough toxicity around her. She was that nerd-type but she was born with the most peculiar beauty. She was adorable for everyone and her grandparents spoiled her back then. Not until she entered the stage of puberty. She became fat and ugly. She became a laughing stock and her mother couldn't stand it that she had to go through expensive treatment.

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Jai_vardhan

2yr

Commented

isnt it always the case

Perfection isn't simple. Anyone has their definition of perfection. But as for Victoria, she is way too simple to be perfect. She has a luxurious life because her family is rich. They look perfect through the news and media. But not when you look inside.

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Jai_vardhan

2yr

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

ch 0 1 To Where it Starts

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Jai_vardhan

2yr

Commented

you used he for both

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Jai_vardhan

2yr

Commented

dont use he for both

"Don't say a word." He said softly. He nodded and followed Butler no matter what.

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Jai_vardhan

2yr

Commented

another story?

Once the butler left, he turned on his flashlight and pulled the drawer as he took out a notebook that contains the photo of his real mother. Back then, his mother was the loving one. His father loves her too much until that woman came. The woman who claimed to be the real wife of his father. They kicked his mother out and he never heard about her anymore. But she left him something. He said that with it, he can say that he's the rightful heir of the mansion and everything.

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Jai_vardhan

2yr

Commented

so is that old duke was the one who killed?

He couldn't sleep at night thinking about what he witnessed while hunting on the boundary. A little boy almost died because of that man who was after him. Then, at that time, news came up that the Etrama family was in an accident. Then, this time, there's a follow-up from their autopsy. Duke Henry IV and his wife, Duchess Aubrey Arwen Etrama together with their son died in a car accident. Soon, it was said that the case was a murder. Then, the Old Duke that now takes over everything said that he will hunt down the people who are connected to it.

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Jai_vardhan

2yr

Commented

suspense?

"It's me." The man said softly and then Ivan recognized the voice. It's someone he can trust. "You are safe now."

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Jai_vardhan

2yr

Commented

wow arrow and gun at the same tme!

Ivan closed his eyes, waiting for what will happen next. But he heard a scream, then he saw the man with an arrow stuck on his left wrist and the gun on the ground.

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Jai_vardhan

2yr

Commented

silencer?

His chilling laugh echoed as he dropped him off the ground. Ivan saw him take out something inside his suit with his right hand. He cannot see what it was but he saw him attached it with his gun in his left hand.