Johann_Geldenhuys - Profile

Love the story!! Writhing quality sometimes lacking but mostly because of translation issues. I like the pace of the story, there wasn’t allot of times where I hade the feeling that it’s dragging on for contents sake. Its planned out nicely and gives me a feeling that I can read it again and find new hidden meanings Story line kind of generic(but lets be honest we love generic) I would like to see a large twist where something completely unexpected happiness but we’ll see as the story continues. Characters is great good steady progress(would like a bit more of the side cast in the form of personal story’s tho) Overall a 9/10, recommend to anyone who likes these kind of story’s but wants a change of pace. I love imagining how all this asian lore would look in a wester European style.