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No the character has continuously perverted thoughts and actions throughout. as of it's written by a horny virgin teenager...

I'm at chapter 58 where I'm going to stop. the character is over the limit pervert that takes away from the story itself to much in my opinion.

Also, I've been reading this story since the beginningish.

This author has above and beyond with story creation, world building and character development. The best story I've read so far (which has been dozens). I normally wait a long time to comment but I have to say give this novel a thorough read. No harem, no male MC makes females orgasm repeatedly when a virgin BS, no OP character from the get go but a very unique and powerful system that builds in strength realistically. Keep up the great work!

This story is constantly interesting and the development of multiple characters is a nice change of pace for a lot of fantasy stories I've read. I feel like i actually understand the feelings and personas of each big characters that enter the story

very interesting concept and overall well portrayed. the normal grammar errors/wording mishaps but that's expected in a web novel without a publisher. still a great story and i hope the Author keeps pushing forward!

i really enjoy this book. Read the 26 chapters available and eagerly waiting for what comes next!!! definitely a good read and i hope the Author continues forward for a long time to come!