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Replied to DarkTezza
Actually this is my original story. If you read the books as you claim you would realize that the following books are completely written different from the original. To make a long story short, I was in the military at the time when I initially posted this story on Literotica in 1998. I took it down as I had plans to publish it and found out someone had taken it. I initially took this to court with sworn affidavits from people I had sought advice from while writing it. I also provided multiple copies of the initial drafts from when I started writing it in my Junior year of high school in 1995. However, because I was in the military in 1998, I was given an ultimatum by the Commander and JAG of my installation after it was all made public. I had to drop the case or face charges for conduct unbecoming for writing pornography while serving Active Duty. The follow on story was thankfully never published online and to this day remains about 60% or so complete. I have had friends read those books and they can tell that there were changes to the initial book and that the 2nd and 3rd books never follow the same writing style as the 1st book. Also to note... there was never any intention to make this a trilogy. It was two books and I have about 10 short stories that would potentially serve as an anthology to complement the story. Parts I took out and decided to make small stories on because honestly, the story is rather long in the first place. Believe it or not, I don't care but I have the paperwork to back my story up. So yes now that I retired from the military after 23 years, I decided to post it back online. I still intend to finish the follow on but unfortunately life has kept me busy this past year.
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You didn't name the man. Sentence just ends and you go to name a woman and then two other men.
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last word not last world

Though I said that, even before the last world left my mouth, the Purple Lightning Sword already cut through him. His bladed staff which he somehow managed to lift was also cut in two.

The Ultimate Support Character

The Ultimate Support Character

Fantasy · Dyrem

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In a blink of an eye

On the brink of an eye, she wrapped it up around her shoulders. It was then she realized that it had a weird texture to it. And why wouldn't it be? It was made of monster skin and fur.

Shinobi From Hell

Shinobi From Hell

Fantasy · Shiny_Shirogane

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Replied to LamenThief
when you say one thing in a chapter completely changing what was said in an easier chapter... that's an inconsistency... and since you don't want such "bad readers" to read your book... maybe you should stop writing... might do the world a favor... makes me wonder with how you talk to people if you didn't still your story from someone else.... your rants are different compared to the writing style of the book... [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Envy was one of the Great Demons with the most potential to gain power, and like the others except for Sloth, thought Lust was the weakest of them. Of course, they had no way of knowing how incredibly strong Lust and Lucien's connection could be, and soon everyone would have to revise their ideas of what the true power was.

Lust Knight

Lust Knight

Fantasy · LamenThief

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Replied to LamenThief
lol... YOU cause your problems with readers. I've read the comments and reviews and it's you that take offense even to complements. As typical, you gloss over the good stuff. The fact I liked your book and was HELPING you with an inconsistency isn't trashing you as the author or the book. You do it to yourself and your own book.

Envy was one of the Great Demons with the most potential to gain power, and like the others except for Sloth, thought Lust was the weakest of them. Of course, they had no way of knowing how incredibly strong Lust and Lucien's connection could be, and soon everyone would have to revise their ideas of what the true power was.

Lust Knight

Lust Knight

Fantasy · LamenThief

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how you would try to escape from me

"You are already mine. I would love to find out how you escape from me." Klautz words had more than one meaning. But it doesn't take a genius to figure out what Selena interpreted his words as. Selena took it as his declaration of love for her whereas the reality of the matter was that Klautz indeed wanted her to try to escape; So that he can judge the limits of his class.

Shinobi From Hell

Shinobi From Hell

Fantasy · Shiny_Shirogane

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But Selena's thoughts... it wasn't Verona who was thinking in the previous paragraph.

But Verona's thought didn't reach Klautz as he was more focused on trying to read Verona's face… after all Klautz not only wants an answer from her but also wants to figure out her underlying intentions.

Shinobi From Hell

Shinobi From Hell

Fantasy · Shiny_Shirogane

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dare get in his way

In a lot of ways, Selena had the gut feeling that Klautz doesn't need her. In a way, it was indeed true that he could do away without her. and he would toss her aside the moment she did something against his interests, therefore Selena didn't dare come in his way.

Shinobi From Hell

Shinobi From Hell

Fantasy · Shiny_Shirogane

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