ThePharaonicDoc

10mth

Posted

Blessed land this !!! BLESSED LAND THAT IN THE BLESSED LAND TOO MUCH BLESSED LANDS IN ONE SENTENCE !!!!!! Very horrible. the idea is good if only it was translated in a good way

Global Blessed Land: I Can Add Attributes On The Buildings

Eastern · Pond Fish In October

ThePharaonicDoc

10mth

Posted

Brilliant, i love it! Brilliant, i love it! Brilliant, i love it! Brilliant, i love it! Brilliant, i love it! Brilliant, i love it! Brilliant, i love it! Brilliant, i love it! lol had to make enough characters xD

ThePharaonicDoc

10mth

Posted

well, it's the kind of *Simple and enjoyable* novel. So far not much of the world is introduced but the pace is good and no cliches (Chapter 10), Looking forward for the future chapters. Good job author.

The Necromancer's Rise to the God of Death & Undead

Fantasy · The_True_Will

ThePharaonicDoc

11mth

Posted

Please fix the grammar and punctuation ... all I've read was the first chapter and almost every paragraph has a mistake in it. it leaves a bad first impression so work on that while updating cause i like the idea of the story and I'd like to read more.

ThePharaonicDoc

1yr

Commented

Honestly, I'm very annoyed by the info and flashbacks in the middle of the fight, i mean he could think all those while escaping not in the middle of the fight then get surprised by stuff happening x.x

'If this guy is at this level, then I have to move quickly, otherwise, my death is certain." Lyle told himself as focused on the young duke whose expression had changed once again.

ThePharaonicDoc

1yr

Commented

كل سنه و انت طيب يسط xD

Guess who just turned 28! Should I be worried?

ThePharaonicDoc

1yr

Posted

Don't stop writing this novel please, Your writing style is good even tho it's not an original but as ur first story i give you 5/5 thumps up man just for the original power up theme

This book has been deleted.

ThePharaonicDoc

1yr

Posted

A very interesting concept tbh , but it's weird talking about the past and the present like we already know about his past and it was never mentioned her recarniated or something in the very beginning. + GOD DAMN HE TALKS TO HIMSELF MUCH , SO MUCH INNER MONOLOUGE sheesh. so far i read up to chapter 22 and the way things are going he's like one rank behind the stongest beings ? just without a back up lol

ThePharaonicDoc

1yr

Posted

Well , It's fulfilling , The character growth and changes are just amazing , the world is still not so clear until now but so far so good , the writing still is also good which is a relief lol

ThePharaonicDoc

1yr

Replied to nicholas8293

Is it a good novel tho ? i have it on book marks but the comments were not positive

[Indomitable Will - PASSIVE - LV MAX -

ThePharaonicDoc

1yr

Posted

honestly everything is perfect , the world , the writing , the background , how everything just connects , JUST SOOOOO SLOOOWWW UPDATES LIKE UGHHGHG

ThePharaonicDoc

2yr

Replied to Cultured_Daoist

She's in the cover , so nope impossible unless he just wanna ruin his story xD

Together we were going to reach the heights of the arcane.

"Well, this pyramid was made for situations like this," The Ancient One smiled, pointing at the walls, "Believe it or not, some of the best mages in the earth's history, came from Egypt, granted, their mages didn't excel in raw power, or numbers, but they were particularly good in preparing for the worse, this pyramid was one of those cases,"