Webnovel Author: FoodReviewSnake - Novel Collection

100K is Close

Just checked it out, it's beautiful.

What is it with these books filled with unnecessary comedy every page is filled with cringy jokes which give the reader second hand embarrassment and the Grammer is horrible so many mistakes this needs to be fixed before author even releases the next chapter.

Its your first novel. I know you will get better on your next novel keep grinding

Mc is an individual dependent on the system for everything. His mindset is flawed he gives benefits to his friends just for the sake of being his friend. The only reason he is still alive right now is because of the plot armor otherwise in reality I would see a character like this perishing under 50 chapters. Garbage novel nothing you can't find here just a replica of other anti hero system novels.

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Congrats on 100K I see you reach a million easily if your bound completing the novel

that's a good decision comedy should be forbidden in dark novels ruins the entire atmosphere the more depressing the environment the better

Author I see a lot of undertone out of place comedy does it get fixed in later chapters or remains the same currently at chapter 15

I was not as fortunate

Your work stands out when compared to other dark novels so I just HAD to comment and let you know

Despite author saying he is new to writing dark novels I find it difficult to believe because up to now I was immersed in this world so the author is probably improving at lightning speed which I am happy for you don't find dark novels with quality like this these days. If mc could be described in one word it would be rational and benefit oriented mc is fighting alone against the world put against him but it dosen't faze him because in his eyes everyone is exp to him. Don't read this if your a snowflake.

The Idea was promising but the undertone out of place comedy made the novel braindead. So many out of place things happening in the novel it's insane the mc acts like Deadpool breaking the fourth wall saying quirky jokes now and then to himself. What was especially retard,ed was mc thirsting over some weak baggage alien named Naba and telling him how to get stronger infinitely and once the other Saiyans learn this non of them have the brains to copy the mc and grow stronger then him because of the protagonist halo keeping everyone's IQ at minus 100 so there you have it the novel was promising at start but western authors can't write any fanfic without a hundred fuc,kup's compared to Chinese authors. Waste of time...

Every author I ask has that same delusional answer. I have read books of all genre for 5 years so take it as a passer bys advice your the author whether your story is ruined or not doesn't concern me except if it's good I will stick around and recommend you to my server. My only purpose was to tell you that putting romance in novels ruins them unless your writing a urban slice of life you will have plenty of relationships with side characters the fact you say that "romance" that will be as small as a grain will be included and cope it up at a realistic relationship is beyond my understanding. Best of luck to you I mean your work no harm.