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AreeSensei

AreeSensei

female LV 2

Home of Kaiju, Samurai, Zombies and Charming Monsters. . Genres: Fantasy, supernatural, romance, action, adventure. . Gintama fanfictions: Eternal Yorozuya. . Support me: ko-fi.com/areesensei

2021-01-31 Joined France

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ABSOLUTELY. I'M GOING TO TACKLE GHOST STORIES
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ch 44 Case File N°2: The Ghost In The Window - The Fifth Guest.

Undying Fondness

Undying Fondness

Contemporary Romance · AreeSensei

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Wow rude

"You have no right to question me so shut up" he said,

Wrath of the demonic king

Wrath of the demonic king

Eastern Fantasy · Darkswan

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Zombies are my babies 😍

Later that day the girl went and sat by the lake wondering who it was that saved her. She sighed then saw a dark smoke coming form the mountains. When she looked closer they were zombies coming towards her, the girl eyes widened and as one tried to grab her she flew up in the air and threw a few talisman on the zombies which made them disappeared immediately.

Wrath of the demonic king

Wrath of the demonic king

Eastern Fantasy · Darkswan

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Does your description follows a character entering the kingdom, or is it only scenic, overall description? Be it one or another, your text need more structure here.
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Verb tenses not matching up here.
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Too luch repeat of the word "kingdom". Try periphrases or synonyms here to lighten the text.
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"Oops, I replied yes," Arahabaki said.

Shinde Inc.

Shinde Inc.

Magical Realism · mathepid

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BUT HE'S TROUBLESOME
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"Oops, I replied yes," Arahabaki said.

Shinde Inc.

Shinde Inc.

Magical Realism · mathepid

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"I only need one volunteer to follow. Can't go in empty without a contingency," Arahabaki winked. 

Shinde Inc.

Shinde Inc.

Magical Realism · mathepid

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I WAS SO SURE IT WOULD BE KURO. COME ON!

"I only need one volunteer to follow. Can't go in empty without a contingency," Arahabaki winked. 

Shinde Inc.

Shinde Inc.

Magical Realism · mathepid

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YEAH BUT THAT DOESN'T EXCUSE HIM.
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"Oops, I replied yes," Arahabaki said.

Shinde Inc.

Shinde Inc.

Magical Realism · mathepid

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True... I guess we're just a war-monging species

Villages burned for nights while screams of grief, loss, and pain reverberated through the mountains. The Kingdom of Arahabaki was not the only one to fall. One by one the other northern habitats fell to the sweeping invasions which led to Yamato's unification of current Japan. 

Shinde Inc.

Shinde Inc.

Magical Realism · mathepid

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"Oh no, the rest will deal with the human for disturbing you. Didn't realise that your momonofu spirits consume ghosts… surprising what one can still learn sometimes from another," she said. 

Shinde Inc.

Shinde Inc.

Magical Realism · mathepid

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