Webnovel Author: AkuaSenpai - Novel Collection

Loving this story, even if it is still in its infancy. There is a lot of tension and intrigue, the characters feel believable and something about the experience of reading it is just irresistible, constantly leaving you wanting more. There is a heavy focus on dialogue and the characters which honestly is my favourite thing in stories like these, so honestly, great work. My only one minor criticism would be the reliance on ellipsis, which I think can sometimes work against you when the rest of the writing is so strong. You can definitely show the passage of time through word choice and line length along with the occasional use of ellipsis. But other than that, it's a 10/10 in my book so far! I'm honestly glad to find something with this much potential so early on in it's run, but I'm a little annoyed I can't just pick up the next few chapters now as I am yearning for more!