Well that was just a bunch of nothing... the entire last chapter + this.
An ear-splitting shockwave shattered the silence as the two figures appeared atop the mountain, their clash breaking apart only for a breathless instant. Reality itself seemed to seize that fleeting pause, hurriedly recording their existence, as though struggling to keep pace with beings who moved beyond its grasp.
CLEAVER OF SIN
Fantasy · LORDTEE
yeah sick author. let's just hope he gets better
fuuuuuck tftc
yeah they can reproduce it but I think it's more like over time with experiments snd not instantanously. i think fake maged can reproduce it too but thex would need way more time for it. like I'd imagine a true mage would need a day or less to reproduce it whereas a fake qould have to experiment for weeks if not months ro reproduce a relatively easy tier 4 spell
Lith had done his best. He needed to experience the spell with fake magic, before being able to reproduce and enhance it with true magic. Yet he ended up in fourth place.
Supreme Magus
Fantasy · Legion20
uhm... is a fruitcake nutty?
"Personally, I have always considered her Ladyship nuttier than a fruitcake." Chimed in Poltus, the butler and head of the staff. He was the one who had welcomed Lith at his arrival.
Supreme Magus
Fantasy · Legion20
no i think it's correct as it is, since it's hadn't been habitable. i think it hadn't been habited would be more correct depending on what the author wants to say but i think it's still somewhat what the author wants to say if you're catching my drift.
Levi and the others had learned quite a bit about it from the network during their research, making them find out that Jasmine's territory had been recorded as owned by an unknown entity for more than a million years... the way he/she earned it was undisclosed. Though they did find that the territory hadn't been habitable for all of these years.
The Glorious Evolution
Fantasy · MidGard
last sentence is a bit weird. His hair looked like it would directly snap off or fall off his head if you so much as touched it. is better i think
Sylas' usually bronzed skin was practically as pale as a ghost, his breathing shallow. His hair seemed to have somehow lost all its moisture, as though it could snap if you touched it too forcefully or directly fall off his head.
Genetic Ascension
Fantasy · Awespec
this is my fav smiley of the 3
yep. makes sense. Thankss
Yeah the fight between Asher and Rayaen was basically written the exact same way as the fight Between Malik and one of the sinavaire, both of whom are supposed to be almost godlike characters. and yet 2 children had almost the same exact effect on the environment. the last 2 chapters are the definition of "Thanks, this could have been an email"
CLEAVER OF SIN
Fantasy · LORDTEE