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RedactedBatterflew

RedactedBatterflew

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2021-02-12 Joined Philippines

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portions or potions?
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Blessed with the Moon

Blessed with the Moon

Fantasy · DyaAran

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It is reasonable for Asnards to not invade Lanir, since they are law-abiders. It is just suspicious that the Lanir just let a ticking timebomb near them. If I am the king of Lanir, then I would befriend the vampires secretly and bait them with sweet revenge. I will support them and try to lengthen the war. It is full of merits on our part, since the Asnards will not criticize us much, since it is a 'righteous' war they created by angering the vampires. When they are tired, we will attack. Anyway, good job author. I gave you the title of Best Namer and Best World-Builder.
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Blessed with the Moon

Blessed with the Moon

Fantasy · DyaAran

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I want to know why the humans just let the Arands dominate or they also have a plan for this?
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Blessed with the Moon

Blessed with the Moon

Fantasy · DyaAran

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Author is it possible that the werewolves just thought of the idea of eliminating vampires or they have an established plan already and just waiting for the perfect chance.
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Blessed with the Moon

Blessed with the Moon

Fantasy · DyaAran

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yup, noted

A long huge snake tried to eat it, but the wind changed its direction, which disappointed the waiting snake. The apple falls down the grassy paradise.

Death Pork

Death Pork

Anime & Comics · RedactedBatterflew

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Minor errors. I recommend grammarly. I pass my novels to grammarly first before I publish. Check satisfactory
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Urban · keulijeu

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It's pretty obvious who is this, don't you think? Its Th*spoiler*deus! Sheesh! Don't say to author-san that I spoiled it.
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Urban · keulijeu

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Check this author. I think this sentence is already said.
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Urban · keulijeu

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Hi author-san, I am late by 7 days to your review swap, but it's better late than a dishonest man. Good grammar. I would like the archaic word 'hearken' to be replaced by a softer word 'listen' since it is so archaic if you know what I mean. Check the archaic words pls. I like the characters and you are so much better than me in naming. I wish to learn from you. I am still reading Chapter 1, so it is still early to comment about the plot.
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Urban · keulijeu

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Replied to keulijeu
Please elaborate if you like it or not. It may be cliche or outright cringy, so leave a review.
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Replied to keulijeu
I already done it. Check it out! Thank you for noticing!
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I do not know if you like it, but I can change it if you like. I planned to make it as her trademark, but the readers are the boss so just leave a review.
RedactedBatterflew
Replied to keulijeu
Thanks. I remember that there is a red line below the word, but I did not notice what's wrong with it. "Time froze." does not sound right, so I put a 'd'. Thank you so much!
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