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experiment0789

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Agian, in THE future.
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That's why he decided to be serious about it, and his resolution became even stronger after seeing Lilly working so hard for his sake. He didn't want something to happen to her in future because he was weak.

Strongest Mage with the Lust system

Strongest Mage with the Lust system

Fantasy · Blizzard54k

experiment0789
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Help me in THE future.

"It's fine. You can fight me however you want. Even if you seriously injure me, I won't blame you. Moreover, I'll be grateful to you. After all, I want real fighting experience which will help me in future." He said resolutely with determination in his eyes.

Strongest Mage with the Lust system

Strongest Mage with the Lust system

Fantasy · Blizzard54k

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Your welcome. I'm sorry to say that I won't be finishing since it seems that web novel got rid of the fast pass system, so I won't be reading past the last unlocked chapter. I not going to say this is the best thing I ever read but considering everything this is pretty good and you should feel proud of it.
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experiment0789
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You mean no ONE can object to their relationship. (don't sweat it,if it makes you feel better, out of the few stories I have read on here from first time authors, your is pretty light on spelling and/or grammatical errors.)

Lilly froze for a second. She vaguely understood his meaning. If she wanted to marry him, she needed enough strength so that no can object to their relationship. She then nodded toward him.

Strongest Mage with the Lust system

Strongest Mage with the Lust system

Fantasy · Blizzard54k

experiment0789
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1. take out the first you in "Hehe, how can I believe you what you say?" 2. It should be "She sent HER mana inside his body", not "She sent HIS mana inside his body".

"Hehe, how can I believe you what you say? Let me check for myself." Madam Mari walked toward him and touched him on the shoulder as she sent his mana inside his body. After taking a look, she was astounded.

Strongest Mage with the Lust system

Strongest Mage with the Lust system

Fantasy · Blizzard54k

experiment0789
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Did you mean it to read, "as YOU want"?
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experiment0789
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"Eva smiled at HER seductively"... cough, him, cough.
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experiment0789
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He has breasts?
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He kissed her passionately, his tongue dancing around and sucking on her sweet tongue. While kissing he started caressing his breasts slowly.

Strongest Mage with the Lust system

Strongest Mage with the Lust system

Fantasy · Blizzard54k

experiment0789
experiment0789
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What she what do for him...
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After he got injured and was unconscious for five days I felt my world crumble. How I wished him to wake and get better! And he did. I was relieved but when he asked me in a roundabout manner what she what do for him. I instantly knew what he wanted to ask. I didn't hesitate and told him that I'll his and he can do whatever he wanted with me.

Strongest Mage with the Lust system

Strongest Mage with the Lust system

Fantasy · Blizzard54k

experiment0789
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Get Dressed ----- Got Dressed
experiment0789
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Never felt this better before.
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He waved his hand and got out of the bed. "I'm completely fine. As a matter of fact, I have never felt this better before." Max said while examining his body. Lilly blushed thinking that he was referring to 'that'.

Strongest Mage with the Lust system

Strongest Mage with the Lust system

Fantasy · Blizzard54k

experiment0789
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I'm sure he liked them but think you meant to say he licked them.
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Max directly went and groped her boobs with one hand each. He was unable to grope them in one hand. He started squeezing them and them brought his face close to one of them and liked her nipple and started to suck on it while he kept rubbing her other breast.

Strongest Mage with the Lust system

Strongest Mage with the Lust system

Fantasy · Blizzard54k

experiment0789
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Wow, a TOW star mage!
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experiment0789
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the word your looking for is disobey.
experiment0789
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Do you mean haven't?

"Oh right, I have given you permission to enter there. I'll go there myself, since you won't even know what to pick there."

HP: I Have "Pure" Magic

HP: I Have "Pure" Magic

Book&Literature · Snollygoster

experiment0789
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You can have him lie to his girlfriend but he feels nothing about telling the truth to her parents in front of her.
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"Yes, I am. My actual age is around 12. My brain development was faster that any normal people. So I finished my muggle education fast and decided to try doing business."

HP: I Have "Pure" Magic

HP: I Have "Pure" Magic

Book&Literature · Snollygoster

experiment0789
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Well if that's how you feel then why don't you tell her the imaginary dead grandma is made up too, you hypocrite.

2)Now, if you're not a fool to spout out everything and you still don't want to lie, then you can forget about truly getting close to them. Would you love and trust someone who doesn't return that trust back to you? It would have a lot of drama, like- 'Hey, I can't tell you the reason behind these absurd things but I need you to trust that I'm not some dark wizard trying to sacrifice you. I'm keeping these secrets for our own good.'

HP: I Have "Pure" Magic

HP: I Have "Pure" Magic

Book&Literature · Snollygoster

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experiment0789
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I just don't get why he feels he need to lie here, he can keep the old grandma stuff, but taking a potion so a young orphan can deal in more adult matters so he can improve his life is too hard to believe... yeah, like I said why can't he tell the truth to her?

P.S. A bit of Chris's explaination is still pending. It expands more on why he had to lie more. So, if you feel uncomfortable with the dishonesty here, then be at ease. I'm busy at the moment so I posted this much. So, 'hang' in there!

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HP: I Have "Pure" Magic

Book&Literature · Snollygoster

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